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The Eye of the Temptress

Weary of sleep, I trudge on and on Finding no haven, the last remnants of hope gone When suddenly I see an inn embracing the bay “Descend here at ‘The Temptress’”, it says At the very entrance is a portrait of a mistress The place, they say is named after this temptress But alas! She is no more the writing below the portrait states So saddening are the words ‘Late Miss Mary Brace’ I enter and order myself a gin The temptress’s beauty plundering my mind like sin Gin after gin, down my throat it flows Outside the wind and storm bellows With time I feel someone’s gaze upon me I turn back and it is a figure in black it seems Clad in a veil, hidden in darkness Mystery emanating from her in all its bountifulness She gets up and prepares to leave Midway,halts in her trail, looks back and beckons me Hypnotised I follow, the gin making me sway I try and see her face but to no avail Her footsteps echo against the earthen floor In symphony with the thunder outside that roars She turns a corner and a flash of light falls on her face But all I can see is her eye, a sparkling green jade Familiarity strikes me, I have seen her before! With no answer, my mind is rattled to the core When she slowly lifts her veil My heart threatens to burst when I see it is Mary Brace! She hovers in the air, her frame surrounded by a glow Before she finally disappears in a whirl of mist and snow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/7/2014 4:18:00 PM
Now, did this have to end? I was enjoying it! Very good; managed to grab my attention and imagination. Write on:) // paul
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Date: 5/12/2014 9:53:00 AM
This was a great read :)
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Date: 4/2/2014 12:39:00 PM
Very original! all heart Varenya! :-) Keith
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Varenya Raina
Date: 5/10/2014 8:28:00 AM
Thankyou Keith! :D
Date: 3/8/2014 3:36:00 PM
Verenya, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Varenya Raina
Date: 3/9/2014 5:02:00 AM
Thankyou Linda! I will surely check out the link! :)
Date: 3/7/2014 7:38:00 AM
good write.
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Varenya Raina
Date: 3/7/2014 11:42:00 AM
Thankyou kenisha shines! :)
Date: 3/6/2014 12:31:00 PM
Such good Imagery, and very good details please write some more.
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Varenya Raina
Date: 3/7/2014 11:43:00 AM
Thankyou Cheyenne Nienhueser! :)
Date: 3/6/2014 12:28:00 PM
Such good Imagery, and very good details please write some more.
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Date: 3/6/2014 8:47:00 AM
Spooky! You had me enthralled from start to finish. A terrific first offering to the soup. I look forward to reading more of your poems. Welcome to the soup, I have a feeling you will fit in nicely.
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Varenya Raina
Date: 3/7/2014 11:43:00 AM
Thankyou Richard Lamoureux! :)
Date: 3/5/2014 11:08:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Varenya - I choose your first beautiful written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise
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Varenya Raina
Date: 3/7/2014 11:44:00 AM
Thankyou Anne Lise Andresen! :)
Date: 3/5/2014 10:00:00 AM
I like your first poem on the soup. I want to read more from you. A perfect 7 poem. Varenya, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Varenya Raina
Date: 3/7/2014 11:42:00 AM
Thankyou SKAT A! :)

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