The Eye of the Beholder

She’s getting more decrepit, by degrees.                        
Her heart is threatening to go on strike,
with kidneys out in sympathy.  She’s like
a mole without her glasses, and the knees,
now varicose, resemble Stilton cheese.
Her mouth works like an oxygen-starved pike
each time she reads.  A portrait by Van Dyck
would show more movement in its eyes than these.

But when I look at her, I see the girl,
the one I met that first time in the square,
bandana loosely swathing careless curls,
the little smile that made me stop and stare.
To me, she’s always lovely, always new:
for things there are that Time can not undo.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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O.J. Hunt Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 11:08 AM
A beautiful tribute without judgment, the world needs more of you Michael. The heart which flows the waterfall....
Coy Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 8:44 AM
That's a mighty compliment, Keith. Thank you!
Turner Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 10:07 AM
I love this sonnet, Michael. Well done!
Coy Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 4:25 PM
Daniel, thank you so much! I appreciate your encouragement.
White Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 9:35 AM
Aww, this is beautiful. I hope that one day someone will look at me with eyes that remember who I once was...
Coy Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 4:25 PM
My partner is not as hideous as described in the poem, but I definitely see her as she was, not as she is. That's love, I guess!
Capitano Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Beautiful Michael, the way we remember is important; keep her young in your heart and she will always be there.
Coy Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 8:13 AM
Delightful words, Phil. I'm grateful.
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