The Eye

A dark island
Surrounded by sky blue
With strands of stratus spread
Far across its range
On the boundaries of said skysea
Is a ring circling all not white
What a beautiful blue-gray
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 17, 2010 at 4:58 PM
Incredible metaphoric description of the eye. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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