The Extra Mile

She went the extra mile for me.
I loved her for the world to see.
She was all a woman could be,
And I miss her so much.

Anything I needed she’d do.
War had left me disabled too.
She’d enable me to renew,
Help With walking and such.

The extra mile came with her smile.
She made it all seem quite worthwhile.
I loved the way she went that mile.
She always was my crutch.

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Date: 10/23/2023 12:43:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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Date: 12/6/2023 6:59:00 AM
Thanks Jeanette
Date: 9/1/2023 8:08:00 AM
Wonderful; congratulations
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Date: 1/5/2024 2:58:00 AM
Thanks Terry. I had good subject matter to work with on this one. Its all true.
Date: 8/30/2023 2:25:00 PM
A touching write, Merv! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/30/2023 2:28:00 PM
Dearest Kim, thank you so much. Pretty name, it is the name of my one and only daughter, and she is beautiful.
Date: 8/30/2023 3:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Charles' contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 8/30/2023 2:32:00 PM
Dearest Sara, I have gratitude for your ongoing praise.
Date: 8/29/2023 6:30:00 AM
"She always was my crutch" - Great poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/30/2023 2:30:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Christuraj, your congratulations are welcomed.
Date: 8/29/2023 5:34:00 AM
A sad one, but a good one, my friend. Great writing, Mery. Congratulations on your win! Charlie
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Date: 8/30/2023 2:20:00 PM
Oh not so sad Charlie, my man, I am a fairly happy old bloke. Nothing that I want, that I dont already have. Thank for your placement.
Date: 8/15/2023 6:06:00 AM
Aahhh!!! Reads like a good contender for the contest. The high praise of someone you love is uplifting. Sara
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Date: 8/30/2023 2:23:00 PM
Sara dear, your words are like magic, as I improve you encouragement and praise are always near by. Thank you.
Date: 8/14/2023 6:57:00 PM
Maternal love is all through this.
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Date: 8/30/2023 2:26:00 PM
Umm, no, she is my wife, just the lady that I married when my luck was heading fair. What is it they say? If you gave me a fortune, my virtue would be small, If I dint have her to share it, I wouldnt want it at all.
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