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The Exodus

Oh this hour is ill rends those it should reunite together as one, yet my wings from you in flight time it is to say goodbye. © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/27/2013 8:38:00 AM

When I read this again, Yoda came to mind. It must be the wisdom that permeates the piece. Have a great day Harry.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/29/2013 12:46:00 AM

I think I should learn how to write Tanka, glad you liked my tell, I needed some humor ;} thank you for reading '}

Kathryn Collins

Date: 4/13/2013 7:53:00 AM

Oh noooo! I love your old world style in this one. love, Kathy

Robert Johnson

Date: 4/10/2013 3:20:00 PM

The human spirit has solemn wings. Alone in flight is how it sings. If one day comes back round. Together we'll hear a lovely sound. Peace. :)

Sean Goodwin

Date: 4/10/2013 12:33:00 AM

Very deep. Excellent write! Thanks for commenting on mine. -- Sean

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/8/2013 5:06:00 PM

Hi Harry! Soup Mail!

Opondi Ougo

Date: 4/8/2013 3:15:00 AM

There's always a time for everything...a time to read beautiful poems like this..and a time to beg you to stay... after a good read :-)

Kash Poet

Date: 4/7/2013 11:20:00 AM

Very nice tanka here harry.Thought provoking write.

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/7/2013 10:09:00 AM

Hi Harry, just had to come and say hello to you. Miss you *hugs*

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 4/7/2013 9:03:00 AM

dearest Harry.. thank you so much for every visits and supports.. and hoping to read your writes soon <3 :) much luv and hugs <3 Sk

David Williams

Date: 4/7/2013 7:49:00 AM

Harry back for another taste of this wonderful write....David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2013 10:27:00 PM

hello Harry, it is hard to say goodbye... sometimes exodus happen in such a way we don't even get to say and leave with the proper goodbyes .... and if it's a goodbye you are saying... it is going to be hard... adding more hurt to myself is not good... and like my sis on the bottom.. I love it when you stop by always... sorry I haven't been on as much as i was. I do try to keep up. It helps to keep my mind off of things. I hope to hear from you soon. I know you will not leave without a hug. PD

Skat A

Date: 4/6/2013 6:02:00 PM

Harry, hope this is only a poem. You are one of the reasons I still log on to the soup. Love-Skat

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/6/2013 10:22:00 AM

O!! 'arry such angst! Fabulous! Well done. Thank you for your visit and kind words 'arry ;) Big Hug Deb

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/4/2013 3:18:00 PM

This don't sound too good to me. If you are living - you didn't ask for permission. You are not allowed to go. Lucilla

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/3/2013 3:49:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one today..I hope that it is just a poem and not a goodbye unless you really need to say goodbye..Thanks for your visit..Your comment was uplifting..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/3/2013 10:28:00 AM

- I'm not that good with "goodbye" ....... - Well written Harry. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones

Date: 4/2/2013 4:39:00 PM

Farewell..friend......Donna

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/2/2013 2:18:00 AM

never say goodbye always, adieu, and leave the door unlocked behind you xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/1/2013 5:37:00 PM

Say hello the heck with goodbye.

Karen Anglesey

Date: 4/1/2013 5:13:00 PM

This resonated with me Specifically "this hour is ill". I see this as one who is passing on. It reminded me of the recent loss of my mother. Eloquent words

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2013 3:24:00 PM

Hi, there, my friend, thanks for reading my poems today. I need to hurry home from work soon. Will check back later for new poems from you. Luv, Andrea

David Williams

Date: 4/1/2013 2:56:00 PM

Harry I may well join you, very good ....David

James Peranteau

Date: 3/31/2013 6:56:00 PM

Staggering is the thought dear poet, of one that is ripped from us, and too...one who says goodby. This time of year, I'm reminded of Jesus Christ. This is truly a thought provoking write my friend ! Awesome ! Have a wonderful week my friend...much love, james

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/31/2013 4:26:00 PM

Harry....I DO HOPE THIS ISN'T TRUE! :( Well....the poem is absolutely beautiful...but I do hope it isn't true. Please verify! Thanks!