The Exodus

When I read this again, Yoda came to mind. It must be the wisdom that permeates the piece. Have a great day Harry.

I think I should learn how to write Tanka, glad you liked my tell, I needed some humor ;} thank you for reading '}

Oh noooo! I love your old world style in this one. love, Kathy

The human spirit has solemn wings. Alone in flight is how it sings. If one day comes back round. Together we'll hear a lovely sound. Peace. :)

Very deep. Excellent write! Thanks for commenting on mine. -- Sean

Hi Harry! Soup Mail!

There's always a time for everything...a time to read beautiful poems like this..and a time to beg you to stay... after a good read :-)

Very nice tanka here harry.Thought provoking write.

Hi Harry, just had to come and say hello to you. Miss you *hugs*

dearest Harry.. thank you so much for every visits and supports.. and hoping to read your writes soon <3 :) much luv and hugs <3 Sk

Harry back for another taste of this wonderful write....David

hello Harry, it is hard to say goodbye... sometimes exodus happen in such a way we don't even get to say and leave with the proper goodbyes .... and if it's a goodbye you are saying... it is going to be hard... adding more hurt to myself is not good... and like my sis on the bottom.. I love it when you stop by always... sorry I haven't been on as much as i was. I do try to keep up. It helps to keep my mind off of things. I hope to hear from you soon. I know you will not leave without a hug. PD

Harry, hope this is only a poem. You are one of the reasons I still log on to the soup. Love-Skat

O!! 'arry such angst! Fabulous! Well done. Thank you for your visit and kind words 'arry ;) Big Hug Deb

This don't sound too good to me. If you are living - you didn't ask for permission. You are not allowed to go. Lucilla

Enjoyed reading this one today..I hope that it is just a poem and not a goodbye unless you really need to say goodbye..Thanks for your visit..Your comment was uplifting..Sara

- I'm not that good with "goodbye" ....... - Well written Harry. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Farewell..friend......Donna

never say goodbye always, adieu, and leave the door unlocked behind you xx

Say hello the heck with goodbye.

This resonated with me Specifically "this hour is ill". I see this as one who is passing on. It reminded me of the recent loss of my mother. Eloquent words

Hi, there, my friend, thanks for reading my poems today. I need to hurry home from work soon. Will check back later for new poems from you. Luv, Andrea

Harry I may well join you, very good ....David

Staggering is the thought dear poet, of one that is ripped from us, and too...one who says goodby. This time of year, I'm reminded of Jesus Christ. This is truly a thought provoking write my friend ! Awesome ! Have a wonderful week my friend...much love, james

Harry....I DO HOPE THIS ISN'T TRUE! :( Well....the poem is absolutely beautiful...but I do hope it isn't true. Please verify! Thanks!