The Excitement I Hold For Fall

Yesterday I saw a leaf or two fall to the ground                                                             Today while walking I heard a crunching sound    
Looking up I saw some leaves had turned yellow                                                                                 The middle of August and temperatures are mellow     

I'm getting so excited because it's almost September                                                               I've been this way about fall as long as I can remember                                Tomorrow I'll go shopping for apples and sweet cider                                                          The store clerk laughs and couldn't be more snider 

Apples I got plenty, but aren't you rushing the fall season  
 Summer's not even over yet so what is your reason                                                               So I tell him, not feeling the slightest bit of shame                                     September is my favorite month and the trees feel the same    

Author Eileen Clark 2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 9/23/2023 2:23:00 PM
Excellent rhyming and one of the best Month poems I've read.
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Eileen Clark
Date: 9/25/2023 9:53:00 AM
Good day and thank you for reading and commenting on my poem.
Date: 9/23/2023 2:06:00 PM
This is a lovely poem Eileen. Your love and anticipation of the glory to come shines throughout the poem. I love that last line, ‘September is my favourite month and the trees feel the same.’, So enjoyed reading it. Have a wonderful autumn :)
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Eileen Clark
Date: 9/25/2023 9:51:00 AM
Hello Christina, thank you for your lovely comment. Yes fall is without a doubt my favorite time of year.
Date: 9/21/2023 10:10:00 AM
Simply delightful
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Eileen Clark
Date: 9/22/2023 10:39:00 AM
Thank you Karen :)
Date: 9/21/2023 9:22:00 AM
Must be an older poem since September almost over? In any case we get it. Your enthusiasm is contagious
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Eileen Clark
Date: 9/22/2023 10:42:00 AM
Hi, I wrote it at the end of August, thank you for reading and commenting on it.
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