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brook babbling unrevealed deep secrets while... in conversation with the setting sun; exchanging pleasantries effusively in the gloaming. their final... goodbyes; friends. Double Tetractys 3 Poetry Contest Winner: 3rd Place) Sponsored by Eve Roper Photo chosen: 1 Syllables checked at howmanysyllables.com Date written: 09/23/2030

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Date: 10/7/2020 2:44:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go for the contest. Sara..I like the fact that you think of them as friends.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/8/2020 3:30:00 PM
Thank you very much indeed, Sara:-)
Date: 10/2/2020 5:57:00 PM
Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Edward . Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve"
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/4/2020 1:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for my placement, Eve:-) I appreciate the congrats!
Date: 10/2/2020 7:53:00 AM
- Beautiful poem, Edward :) - Congratulations on your third place in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/4/2020 1:52:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise:-) Have a wonderful weekend as well!
Date: 10/2/2020 7:19:00 AM
The word that comes to my mind when reading your Tetrachtys is "tranquil." Congratulations on your winning write, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/4/2020 1:50:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jenna:-) I'm glad you loved it!
Date: 10/2/2020 6:08:00 AM
Most inspirational Edward, love the idea of the setting sun and the brook conversing. Congratulations a well deserved win. Belle
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/4/2020 1:51:00 AM
Thank you, Belle:-) I appreciate it!
Date: 10/2/2020 6:08:00 AM
So beautiful and evocative Edward. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/4/2020 1:50:00 AM
Thank you so much, Linda:-)
Date: 10/1/2020 9:50:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Edward. Congratulations on your wonderful win with your exceptional poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/2/2020 4:07:00 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and comments, Susan:-) Blessings to you!
Date: 9/24/2020 7:05:00 PM
I really like this, Edward!! So descriptive.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/25/2020 3:15:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea:-) I'm glad you did! Blessings, xoxo
Date: 9/23/2020 6:24:00 PM
Wonderful!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/23/2020 7:17:00 PM
Thank you, Kim:-)

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