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The Exchange

brook
babbling
unrevealed
deep secrets while...
in conversation with the setting sun;
exchanging pleasantries effusively
in the gloaming.
their final...
goodbyes;
friends.



Double Tetractys 3 Poetry Contest Winner: 3rd Place)
Sponsored by Eve Roper
Photo chosen: 1
Syllables checked at howmanysyllables.com
Date written: 09/23/2030

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Sara Kendrick Date: 10/7/2020 2:44:00 PM Congrats on your winning work. Way to go for the contest. Sara..I like the fact that you think of them as friends. Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 10/8/2020 3:30:00 PM Thank you very much indeed, Sara:-)

Eve Roper Date: 10/2/2020 5:57:00 PM Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Edward . Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve" Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 10/4/2020 1:53:00 AM Thank you so much for my placement, Eve:-) I appreciate the congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/2/2020 7:53:00 AM - Beautiful poem, Edward :) - Congratulations on your third place in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 10/4/2020 1:52:00 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise:-) Have a wonderful weekend as well!

Jenna Logan Date: 10/2/2020 7:19:00 AM The word that comes to my mind when reading your Tetrachtys is "tranquil." Congratulations on your winning write, Edward. Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 10/4/2020 1:50:00 AM Thank you so much, Jenna:-) I'm glad you loved it!

Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/2/2020 6:08:00 AM Most inspirational Edward, love the idea of the setting sun and the brook conversing. Congratulations a well deserved win. Belle Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 10/4/2020 1:51:00 AM Thank you, Belle:-) I appreciate it!

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/2/2020 6:08:00 AM So beautiful and evocative Edward. Congratulations on the win! Linda Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 10/4/2020 1:50:00 AM Thank you so much, Linda:-)

Susan Ashley Date: 10/1/2020 9:50:00 PM Beautiful imagery, Edward. Congratulations on your wonderful win with your exceptional poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 10/2/2020 4:07:00 AM Thank you so much for your visit and comments, Susan:-) Blessings to you!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/24/2020 7:05:00 PM I really like this, Edward!! So descriptive. Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 9/25/2020 3:15:00 AM Thank you, Andrea:-) I'm glad you did! Blessings, xoxo

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/23/2020 6:24:00 PM Wonderful! Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 9/23/2020 7:17:00 PM Thank you, Kim:-)