Edward Ibeh Poet Tetractys

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The Exchange

brook
babbling
unrevealed
deep secrets while...
in conversation with the setting sun;
exchanging pleasantries effusively
in the gloaming.
their final...
goodbyes;
friends.



Double Tetractys 3 Poetry Contest Winner: 3rd Place)
Sponsored by Eve Roper
Photo chosen: 1
Syllables checked at howmanysyllables.com
Date written: 09/23/2030

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Sara Kendrick October 7, 2020 at 2:44 PM Congrats on your winning work. Way to go for the contest. Sara..I like the fact that you think of them as friends. Edward Ibeh October 8, 2020 at 3:30 PM Thank you very much indeed, Sara:-)

Eve Roper October 2, 2020 at 5:57 PM Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Edward . Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve" Edward Ibeh October 4, 2020 at 1:53 AM Thank you so much for my placement, Eve:-) I appreciate the congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2020 at 7:53 AM - Beautiful poem, Edward :) - Congratulations on your third place in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Edward Ibeh October 4, 2020 at 1:52 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise:-) Have a wonderful weekend as well!

Jenna Logan October 2, 2020 at 7:19 AM The word that comes to my mind when reading your Tetrachtys is "tranquil." Congratulations on your winning write, Edward. Edward Ibeh October 4, 2020 at 1:50 AM Thank you so much, Jenna:-) I'm glad you loved it!

Beryl Edmonds October 2, 2020 at 6:08 AM Most inspirational Edward, love the idea of the setting sun and the brook conversing. Congratulations a well deserved win. Belle Edward Ibeh October 4, 2020 at 1:51 AM Thank you, Belle:-) I appreciate it!

Linda Alice Fowler October 2, 2020 at 6:08 AM So beautiful and evocative Edward. Congratulations on the win! Linda Edward Ibeh October 4, 2020 at 1:50 AM Thank you so much, Linda:-)

Susan Ashley October 1, 2020 at 9:50 PM Beautiful imagery, Edward. Congratulations on your wonderful win with your exceptional poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Edward Ibeh October 2, 2020 at 4:07 AM Thank you so much for your visit and comments, Susan:-) Blessings to you!

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2020 at 7:05 PM I really like this, Edward!! So descriptive. Edward Ibeh September 25, 2020 at 3:15 AM Thank you, Andrea:-) I'm glad you did! Blessings, xoxo

Kim Rodrigues September 23, 2020 at 6:24 PM Wonderful! Edward Ibeh September 23, 2020 at 7:17 PM Thank you, Kim:-)