The Event

For six months straight 
The Art Committee met; 
Sixteen bright and eager minds 
Had planned the great event.

For six months straight 
The artists looked ahead, 
Refining, polishing their jewels 
To shine at the event.

The day arrived.
Dark moisture-laden clouds
Let loose their dreaded tears.
Result of six months straight:
The Art Committee's final words
Announced with sick and heavy heart—
"Call off the great event."

The snow fence, isolated, wet, 
Stood naked in the fog;
The artists packed their gems away— 
There was no great event.

The plans of men, committee groups—
Even with the strength 
Of sixteen bright and eager minds 
Who'd worked for six months straight—
Dissolved in minutes' time 
By nature's fickle, idle whim 
To rain on the event.


September 10, 2014

Contest: Up To You Again
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 10/10/2014 11:17:00 AM
So disappointing Sandra, but so true. No power on earth can stop rain clouds when they are ripe. Congratulations on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/10/2014 2:51:00 PM
Hi Brenda, yes, but you know too as a poet, writing about disappointments helps a lot! Thank you for your congrats. Sandra
Date: 10/10/2014 8:41:00 AM
- I enjoy reading your lovely and well written poem,Sandra ! - Congratulations on your 4rd place in the contest! - Happy weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/10/2014 2:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne Lise, for your nice comment and congratulations. Sandra
Date: 10/10/2014 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations my dear poet friend Sandra. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write. Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/10/2014 2:53:00 PM
Leonora, I so much appreciate your kind words and congratulations. I was so happy to place in your contest. Hugs back to you! Sandra
Date: 10/10/2014 6:28:00 AM
Well penned poem, Sandra, congrats on the win
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/10/2014 2:54:00 PM
Once again, thank you so much, Dr. Ram, for your comment and congratulations. Sandra
Date: 10/10/2014 4:53:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Sandra:-) hugs jan xxx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/10/2014 2:55:00 PM
Thanks again, Jan. Very sweet of you. Sandra
Date: 9/14/2014 1:35:00 AM
gosh DANG. couldnt' they have rented a tent or something?I sure hope it was put off to another day!!! What a horrible thing and you wrote it very well. I sure enjoyed this one.
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Date: 9/10/2014 7:57:00 PM
Been there, done that and it is awful. Great write, Sandra.
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Date: 9/10/2014 7:05:00 PM
oh what an utter disaster this would be:-( great write good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan x
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