The Evening Walk

The summer breeze lapped at my hair
Firmly yet gently lifting each strand
The warm caress of the sun
Brought happiness to my weeping skin
My lips parted as laughter
Freely trickled down my chin
My eyes lit a beaming path for my feet
As I began my evening walk

Abruptly I tripped and fell
Soberly I looked around
For the object of my humility
And found myself gazing into my own eyes
I had tripped and fallen over myself
Fighting to regain a composure
That proved to be elusive
I stood and faced myself
As I continued my evening walk
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April 16, 2025 at 10:00 AM
A very interesting premise Mary. How life can change in an instant when we least expect it - usually when everything seems to be going right and how that affects our thoughts and makes us look deep within ourselves and reevaluate. My thoughts anyway. :) Cheers - Gary
Scott Avatar
April 20, 2025 at 3:04 PM
Thanks for your reflective comments. Life is unpredictable. Sometimes our response can surprise us.
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