The Eternals Wake - Ap

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Hilo Poet.

Human, Wake Up, Light, Esoteric, Shine, Awareness

Listen to poem:

*Image of Human Wake Up Light by Pixabay.

The Eternals Wake

Afterlifer's believes consciousness dabbles, effecting furtherance,
gainsayers, henceforth, interjects jocularity,
knowledgeable limits mortality nonbeing ... obliviates predominating, quasistationary,
relinquishes significance tasked ultrafamiliar,
vaticinators wanderings xenial,
yearning zen.

2021 October 18

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/14/2021 7:08:00 PM

You have a natural talent for writing around the flow of things. My friend, your poem is fantastic. However, I submitted a poem with 26 lines, one line for each letter, and I'm not sure if that's acceptable.

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/14/2021 8:15:00 PM

Lasaad, thanks for entering, and tho' my exampled Abecedarian was phrased and not listed, I didn't specify line limitations yet 26 would have been a factor and therefore acceptable, Aloha!

Evelyn Swartz

Date: 11/12/2021 12:01:00 AM

You truly have a gift for putting words together that flow. You poem is excellent. Your friend, Evelyn

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/12/2021 12:10:00 AM

I welcome your gracious support, Evelyn, a hearty thanks my friend, Aloha!

Eve Roper

Date: 11/8/2021 6:09:00 AM

Great example, William

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/8/2021 7:36:00 AM

Eve, thanks my friend, Aloha!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/4/2021 9:43:00 AM

So many tough words you have used. I will attempt in easier way. Blessings

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/4/2021 10:49:00 AM

Yes, Anisha, much less difficult words out there and I'm glad for your interest my friend, Aloha!

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/31/2021 10:23:00 PM

Wow! great poem I like it...not yet use this form yet but I will try. thanks for sharing. have a great day. ;)

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/31/2021 10:34:00 PM

Here's to hoping you the very best, whether if you enter or not. Peace and joy my friend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/31/2021 12:04:00 PM

very well done, William. It certainly is a difficult form and you really rose to your own challenge!

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/31/2021 1:24:00 PM

I found that pre-alphabetizing to formulate words creating a sensical theme via an Abecedarian form was less difficult than taking it out-of-order via Free Verse. Whichever one tries, its measure will be taxing. My heartfelt thanks, Andrea, Aloha!