The Eternal Journey

"The quiet waters buoy the boat of the departed."
                       - Quote by Poet

Separated from the body
The soul seeks an eternal refuge
Beyond borders
The soul sojourns to the celestial city
Silence walks through the door 
There’s a decline in the numbers that embark on dawn’s bus
Grief pervades the room 
Tributes speak volume 
The symphony ends
The epitaph mirrors the past.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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La France Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 10:40 AM
Thompson, , congratultions on your win in my Grook contest, wonderful, like your quote, Constance
Emate Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 7:26 PM
Thank you, Constance. It's an honour.
Kendrick Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 7:31 AM
Great to see your work honored on the winners' list in Constance's contest. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K
Emate Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 8:36 AM
Thank you, Sara. I'm honoured.
Fowler Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 1:20 PM
Hi Thompson. Love your quote and also love your depiction of judgment day. Thank you! Congratulations! :)
Emate Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 8:36 AM
Thank you, Linda. It's an honour.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 7:41 AM
Heartfelt! (thumping chest) Congrats!
Emate Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 8:37 AM
Thank you, Kim. I'm honoured.
mysore Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 5:10 AM
'silence walks through the door' beautiful thoughts dear poet. congratulations.
Emate Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 8:38 AM
Thank you, Thriveni. I'm honoured.
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