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don't you just want to escape????

Lets plan an epic getaway We’ll have to go on foot. We’ll need to take this hairspray it’s important how we look. We’ll need some Dr. Pepper dehydration is the worst. We’ll take these Disney glasses so that we don’t die of thirst We’re facing certain hardships so I’ll bring potato chips. The wild is full of harshness ooo! Let’s not forget the dip. It’s important to move serpentine as we stealthily make our leave. Be sure and grip the pizza as we deftly bob and weave. This makeup bag’s gigantic but I can’t live without that! Let's not forget this blanket and we better bring the cat. I’m glad that we’ve decided to start our lives anew. There’s no one I like better here, take these iPads too. As we gather up the needed I glance at the TV - AAAwwwwww. “Ladybug’s” coming on! we say excitedly. “Jinx” we say together, and it’s as clear as it can be that we can take a little break and not go immediately.

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Date: 7/4/2020 10:21:00 AM
This is just brilliant..
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Anais Vionet
Date: 7/4/2020 1:30:00 PM
Thank you so much! =]
Date: 7/3/2020 10:26:00 PM
I think I do want to escape after reading this one.
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Date: 7/4/2020 1:34:00 PM
I think we ALL want to escape these days. Thanks for the comment =]
Date: 7/3/2020 1:37:00 PM
You certainly have a way with words; are you kin to Ilene? Aloha! Rico
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Anais Vionet
Date: 7/3/2020 2:13:00 PM
Thank you Rico! =]

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