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The Enemy's Child - Co-Write With Paul C

The battles on the field are harsh and tough The looting in their wake engorged with greed Abundant spoils of war are not enough. Atrocious in their acts that make no sense The women and the girls are taken slaves Abusing them with lust and violence. Unable to resist the touch of shame The captive females cry in pain and fear Their lives will never be again the same. And when the dust of war has blown away The children of the foe get born to those Who months before fell prey and ravaged lay. Unwanted children still need loving care Mothers find it hard to nurture such babes Shame is endured by children in despair. Their lives are defined by horrid attacks Evil men who satisfied selfish needs Indignities make them fall through the cracks. Who loves a child rejected by its kin? Society offers them no solace The “enemy’s child,” created by sin; But all these children still have hearts and souls Rejection renews the cycle of pain When there is no one who cares or consoles. *Co-written with Paul Callus

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/18/2015 9:56:00 AM
How could I not check out this write by two of my fav poets here at the Soup? This to me is an epic write not just for its message but also for its quality and inspiration. A7 and truly deserves a ten! Adding to my fav list and a hearty bravo to you both!!!
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Date: 3/15/2015 2:42:00 PM
Hi Carolyn! Thank you for once more accepting to co-write with me; I know that social topics are close to your heart. Once again, uniting our efforts came with ease and pleasure. I would like to thank all those who are stopping by to read and comment. Love & Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/15/2015 4:31:00 AM
Such a worthy thing to write about, Carolyn. I applaud the both of you on this subject. I am close to where these atrocities take place. There are so many displaced Syrian refugees here, and ISIS is not far from our borders. Some say they are within the country as well. These children are here through no fault of their own....How sad that they should be rejected. God bless you both for this fabulous piece.
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/15/2015 2:43:00 PM
Thank you Eileen for the insightful and informative comments, and for supporting the need for awareness. Hugs // paul
Date: 3/14/2015 12:24:00 PM
heartbreaking write Carolyn and Paul you tackled this subject so so well:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/15/2015 2:09:00 AM
Jan, Paul speaks highly of you as well and I just adore him and his talented pen!
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2015 3:25:00 PM
:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/14/2015 3:24:00 PM
Many thanks, Jan!! I'll have to hire you as my PRO:)) Hugs // paul
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2015 12:29:00 PM
Paul is the most charming man you could ever wish to meet:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/14/2015 12:25:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. Paul came up with the idea and it is always a pleasure to write with him.

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