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1/10/2025 for Ends Poetry Contest sponsored by Craig Cornish

The gifts of life, upon me have been heaped, but, one by one, I say goodbye, and they end, as time's unseen agent mercilessly reaps, and life's pilot announces "time to descend". Goodbye to youth, arms that throw, legs that run, to sex, infatuation, and that kind of dance, and though, I suppose it was mostly fun, it's time to give younger ones their chance. Goodbye to responsibility and work, to old friends, health, dreams, memory and hope, to pretense and my blasted doctor, the jerk, as I reach the end of the line and my rope. All things taken by time's invisible thief - to be unburdened, such a great relief.

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Date: 1/10/2025 2:47:00 PM
I love this…at that age… and my blasted doctor, the jerk…my dad says much of that about my mom’s doctor…he blamed him…
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David Crandall
Date: 1/10/2025 7:05:00 PM
Thanks Kim - glad you liked it!
Date: 1/10/2025 2:00:00 PM
Interesting lines penned. Time does take its toll. Sara K
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David Crandall
Date: 1/10/2025 2:14:00 PM
Thanks Sara. I feel it may sound a bit negative, but I was thinking of having to say goodbye to so many things, as the years go by. Some are hard to say goodbye to and some are quite easy.

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