The Endless Dance

The Endless Dance As I look up at the moon I tend to think of it as being alone Floating in the deep dark cold Surrounded by nothingness But then I remember Something I tend to forget at times It is not alone For it is bound by gravity To the Earth To the other planets To the Sun To the Galaxy To Superclusters of Galaxies To the entire Cosmos I smile I see them all whirl around Bound to each other In the endless dance
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July 30, 2016 at 8:52 PM
Hillard, I read the poem again and it is a top 7, , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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July 30, 2016 at 10:33 PM
Thank you for your kind words. I will be sure to read your writings. I have been writing poetry for over 36 years, with many dry spells during that time. I will work on my profile to try to explain more when I have more time.
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July 30, 2016 at 8:52 PM
Nice to see when new poets center their poems, Hillard, good choice for a post. LINDA
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July 30, 2016 at 10:29 PM
Thank you. I enjoyed writing that one a while back. I am j getting started here. I am looking forward to reading other people's writings. I find the more I read the better my writing gets.
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July 30, 2016 at 6:59 PM
Hillard, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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July 30, 2016 at 10:36 PM
Thank you. I enjoyed writing that one a while back. I am just getting started here. I am looking forward to reading other people's writings. I find the more I read the better my writing gets. I will tell you more about my self when I have more time. Thank for being my friend here already. :)
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July 30, 2016 at 5:46 PM
Very nice poem!
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July 30, 2016 at 10:37 PM
Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. I look forward to meeting other writers here.
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