The End of Frosty

Frosty the Snowman took a hike Fell over some kid’s ten-speed bike Rammed his carrot nose in the ground Two coal eyes were all they found.
written December 21, 2021 [originally written for Tania Kitchin's funny 4-liner contest]
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Leffanta Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 11:07 AM
I thought coal was a no-no, or did this happen on Senator Joe Manchin's front lawn?
Hankins Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 2:34 PM
It could have, Rico. (chuckling) Just the eyes, you understand, cause they don't melt!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 10:36 AM
LOL! I hear he’ll be back some day…Ha*ppy Bir*thday!
Hankins Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 2:34 PM
Thank you, Kim. Yeah, he'll be back. You can't erase Frosty the Snowman!
Koplin Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Did they find his hat?
Hankins Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 9:23 AM
Was no mention of that in the newspaper article, Mark. Also, didn't mention his scarf. But, you know how those reporters can be!
Messina Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 4:49 AM
LOL...Some silly wabbit must have eaten the carrot. Thanks for the laugh, Milton. Best wishes in the contest. Happy Holidays to you and your family!
Hankins Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 7:55 AM
Aw, thanks, Charlie. Yep, I guess that's what happened to it. Happy Holidays to you and your family, too.
Skelly Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 4:29 AM
Dear Milt, sending you seasonal greetings filled with love and serenity. Kindest regards...Love & Hugs Delice
Hankins Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 7:56 AM
Aw, how sweet. Thanks so much, Delice. I always look forward to your comments. Love and hugs to you, too.
Skelly Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 4:08 AM
Oh! feeling sad for Frosty, what an end...Delice
Hankins Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 7:57 AM
Yep. Accidents happen!
Cunningham Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 3:47 AM
Poor Frosty, thaw would have got him anyway lol. Tom
Hankins Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Yeah, in the long run. But such a sad ending for a happy fella! Merry Christmas, again, Mr. Tom.
M  Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 2:16 AM
Hey Milton….I can visualise that just two coal eyes left…..really cute poem. I would love to be having a wintery cold Christmas not the hot stinkers we have predicted for Christmas and boxing days….thank the heavens for aircon! Debx
Hankins Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 8:01 AM
Happy Holidays to you, Deb, no matter what the weather. Thanks for the lovely compliment on the demise of Frosty.
Allison Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 12:54 AM
oh dear what a sad ending lol lol
Hankins Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 8:01 AM
Gosh, Jan, it was supposed to be funny! I'm so glad I wrote another one for the contest. Hope you are nearing top-notch again and have a wonderful Christmas.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 12:46 AM
Oh poor Frosty! Great end rhymes too Hank.
Hankins Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 8:02 AM
Hey, Frosty was going to come to a sad ending anyway, huh?
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