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The Empty Apartment -

Damp winter cold pervades
The emptiness
White painted walls 
Clean sanded floors
All signs of occupation
Gone -

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/6/2011 4:44:00 AM
ready to rent
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Date: 1/5/2011 5:39:00 AM
this is really interesting, Liz, glad i've read it. Harry
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Date: 12/19/2010 7:09:00 PM
Very descriptive, Liz. I really enjoyed the read!
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Date: 12/19/2010 6:46:00 AM
Liz, I like the stark contrast between the pristine apartment and the emptiness the fills the walls. A poignant poem, dear. Have a very merry Christmas. Hope you are spending it with family and friends. Love, Carolyn
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