The Elves Snow Party

Away up north where it’s snowing they say
the elves are preparing for Christmas day.
Big elves little elves, busier than bees
All building toys, for under Christmas trees.

Some work with hammers others building bikes,
some riding through the room on brand new trikes.
Tiny elf voices ringing loud and clear,
everyone’s full of love and Christmas cheer.

Suddenly the chatter stops; all are still,
Santa walked in the room with book and quill.
Looking down at his book, Santa Clause stared,
then lifted his eyebrows as he declared,

Today I looked inside my books
and I found that we are ahead,
and thought because you worked so hard 
we shall all go outside instead.
Misses Claus made lots of sweet treats
so let’s all eat and be hearty,
for today here at the North Pole
all elves shall have a snow party.

Quick as a wink the elves they disappeared,
Santa just smiled as he tugged at his beard.
Laughing he watched his little friends scatter
and soon the mountains echoed with laughter.

Snowballs were flying, snowmen taking form,
and hot chocolate kept little elves warm.
They were sledding, skiing, skating all day,
see, elves aren’t simply, all work and no play.



Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
11.29.2014
Contest: Children’s Christmas or Holiday Tale
1st place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/15/2014 12:34:00 AM
This Christmas story was very cute and I can easily see it becoming a children's book... Nice work, Brenda. I really enjoyed this fun rhyming poem. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/13/2014 5:40:00 PM
Congratulations Brenda, an ideal poem of the week....Seren
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Date: 12/12/2014 9:41:00 PM
wow!!!! i was smiling all throughout the read! splendid, Brenda! congratulations
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Date: 12/12/2014 7:06:00 PM
Wonderful story and congrats on POW :)
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Date: 12/10/2014 6:18:00 PM
WOW YOU WON POEM OF THE WEEK NOT JUST SUNDAY BUT EVERYDAY SINCE THEN!
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Date: 12/10/2014 2:36:00 PM
delighting me to bits, brenda... best wishes for the POTW citation!
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Date: 12/10/2014 10:57:00 AM
As I observed,all that you write is deep poetical.It is magically words flowering or you understand better (not only because name) what really Worte-wie blumen means.Congrat and best wishes of the season.
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Date: 12/10/2014 7:47:00 AM
A great Christmas offering!
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Date: 12/10/2014 7:32:00 AM
congratulations for your selection as poem of the week, how great is that !
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Date: 12/9/2014 10:03:00 AM
Hi Brenda, a huge congratulations to you for your poem being selected Poem of the Week! I knew it was especially special the first time I read it! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/9/2014 12:00:00 AM
Brenda, a big congratulations on being featured as the poem of the week... Verlena
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Date: 12/8/2014 11:51:00 PM
I am so honoured to have my poem as Poem of the Week.
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Date: 12/8/2014 6:02:00 PM
Brenda, Most Wonderful and Most Special!! Congratulations on Poem of the Week!! Best Wishes Always, Gary
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Date: 12/8/2014 6:02:00 PM
God and you are very close to have written a poem like that with so much happiness, joy and meaning. Thanks for sharing with us what God had shared with you.
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Date: 12/8/2014 10:42:00 AM
:) Aren't you a great story teller, Brenda! As I was reading, I kept thinking of my 8 year old niece, Chloe. She'd love to hear this story. LOVELY! Congrats on being chosen POTW.
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Date: 12/8/2014 5:21:00 AM
A perfect choice for poem of the week. Congratulations!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/8/2014 8:05:00 AM
Thanks Maurice.
Date: 12/8/2014 3:23:00 AM
- Congrats with "P.O.T.W.", Brenda !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/8/2014 8:04:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise
Date: 12/7/2014 1:04:00 PM
This was the first Christmas poem I've read. It's nice. It put me in the spirit. And twirled me around. I hope to read more of your poems. Enjoy your day Brenda
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/7/2014 11:03:00 PM
Thanks so much Valerie
Date: 12/7/2014 11:20:00 AM
What a good way to celebrate this great work ! congrats on the win( Poem of the week) Brenda...huggs
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/7/2014 11:07:00 PM
Thanks Kayod5
Date: 12/7/2014 11:15:00 AM
Wow that's an amazing one Brenda! Congrats on top place win my dear!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/7/2014 11:06:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Sharma
Date: 12/7/2014 10:55:00 AM
Hooray!! Congrats on being chosen The Poem of the Week! Dylan is going to be so happy for you...he loves this poem...me too! Hugs, Rhonda
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/7/2014 11:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Rhonda. It is very exciting for me.
Date: 12/7/2014 8:02:00 AM
You rocked the snow love!! Congrats good friend . . . nicely done!!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/7/2014 11:05:00 PM
Thanks David
Date: 12/7/2014 7:49:00 AM
wooohooooooo poem of the week many congrats my friend!!!! hugs jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/7/2014 11:04:00 PM
Thanks Jan. Wow, how exciting ..
Date: 12/6/2014 10:24:00 PM
A wonderful one with flow rhyme; no doubt this stands you out; congrats on the win Brenda...huggs
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/7/2014 11:04:00 PM
Thank you Kayod5
Date: 12/6/2014 1:47:00 PM
Even elves get a break! Very nice. Well done, Brenda! Cheers, Roy
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/6/2014 2:50:00 PM
Thank you Roy.
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