The Elves Snow Party

Away up north where it’s snowing they say
the elves are preparing for Christmas day.
Big elves little elves, busier than bees
All building toys, for under Christmas trees.

Some work with hammers others building bikes,
some riding through the room on brand new trikes.
Tiny elf voices ringing loud and clear,
everyone’s full of love and Christmas cheer.

Suddenly the chatter stops; all are still,
Santa walked in the room with book and quill.
Looking down at his book, Santa Clause stared,
then lifted his eyebrows as he declared,

Today I looked inside my books
and I found that we are ahead,
and thought because you worked so hard 
we shall all go outside instead.
Misses Claus made lots of sweet treats
so let’s all eat and be hearty,
for today here at the North Pole
all elves shall have a snow party.

Quick as a wink the elves they disappeared,
Santa just smiled as he tugged at his beard.
Laughing he watched his little friends scatter
and soon the mountains echoed with laughter.

Snowballs were flying, snowmen taking form,
and hot chocolate kept little elves warm.
They were sledding, skiing, skating all day,
see, elves aren’t simply, all work and no play.



Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
11.29.2014
Contest: Children’s Christmas or Holiday Tale
1st place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Deschler Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 12:34 AM
This Christmas story was very cute and I can easily see it becoming a children's book... Nice work, Brenda. I really enjoyed this fun rhyming poem. Congrats on your win!
Roberts Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 5:40 PM
Congratulations Brenda, an ideal poem of the week....Seren
De La Luna Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 9:41 PM
wow!!!! i was smiling all throughout the read! splendid, Brenda! congratulations
Nance Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 7:06 PM
Wonderful story and congrats on POW :)
Yvonne Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 6:18 PM
WOW YOU WON POEM OF THE WEEK NOT JUST SUNDAY BUT EVERYDAY SINCE THEN!
Onclaud Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 2:36 PM
delighting me to bits, brenda... best wishes for the POTW citation!
Bocsa Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 10:57 AM
As I observed,all that you write is deep poetical.It is magically words flowering or you understand better (not only because name) what really Worte-wie blumen means.Congrat and best wishes of the season.
Eastman Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 7:47 AM
A great Christmas offering!
Stoner Jr Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 7:32 AM
congratulations for your selection as poem of the week, how great is that !
Haight Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 10:03 AM
Hi Brenda, a huge congratulations to you for your poem being selected Poem of the Week! I knew it was especially special the first time I read it! Hugs, Sandra
Walker  Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Brenda, a big congratulations on being featured as the poem of the week... Verlena
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 11:51 PM
I am so honoured to have my poem as Poem of the Week.
Horn Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 6:02 PM
God and you are very close to have written a poem like that with so much happiness, joy and meaning. Thanks for sharing with us what God had shared with you.
Bateman Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 6:02 PM
Brenda, Most Wonderful and Most Special!! Congratulations on Poem of the Week!! Best Wishes Always, Gary
Manassian Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 10:42 AM
:) Aren't you a great story teller, Brenda! As I was reading, I kept thinking of my 8 year old niece, Chloe. She'd love to hear this story. LOVELY! Congrats on being chosen POTW.
Yvonne Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 5:21 AM
A perfect choice for poem of the week. Congratulations!
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 8:05 AM
Thanks Maurice.
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 3:23 AM
- Congrats with "P.O.T.W.", Brenda !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 8:04 AM
Thank you Anne Lise
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December 7, 2014 at 1:04 PM
This was the first Christmas poem I've read. It's nice. It put me in the spirit. And twirled me around. I hope to read more of your poems. Enjoy your day Brenda
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 11:03 PM
Thanks so much Valerie
Kayode Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 11:20 AM
What a good way to celebrate this great work ! congrats on the win( Poem of the week) Brenda...huggs
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 11:07 PM
Thanks Kayod5
A. Sharma Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 11:15 AM
Wow that's an amazing one Brenda! Congrats on top place win my dear!
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 11:06 PM
Thanks Dr. Sharma
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December 7, 2014 at 10:55 AM
Hooray!! Congrats on being chosen The Poem of the Week! Dylan is going to be so happy for you...he loves this poem...me too! Hugs, Rhonda
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 11:06 PM
Thank you so much Rhonda. It is very exciting for me.
Meade Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 8:02 AM
You rocked the snow love!! Congrats good friend . . . nicely done!!
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 11:05 PM
Thanks David
Allison Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 7:49 AM
wooohooooooo poem of the week many congrats my friend!!!! hugs jan xxx
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 11:04 PM
Thanks Jan. Wow, how exciting ..
Kayode Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 10:24 PM
A wonderful one with flow rhyme; no doubt this stands you out; congrats on the win Brenda...huggs
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 11:04 PM
Thank you Kayod5
Jerden Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 1:47 PM
Even elves get a break! Very nice. Well done, Brenda! Cheers, Roy
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 2:50 PM
Thank you Roy.
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