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The Elixir of Moonshine

THE ELIXIR OF MOONSHINE

eyes intoxicated
with bright light,

exotic lashes — luxurious
with midnight mascara, and

the elixir of moonshine.
a foghorn bays...

the brim of his wayward hat,
in line with his pupils.

the sway of his trenchcoat,
the hardness of his knuckles.

he grabs her slender
trembling fingers.

tear droplets drain down
ruddy mountain peaks —

after effects of her shame.
a body tries to wake up.

a cowboy boot, like a weed
in the perpetrator’s chest,

speaks of a different kind
of awakening.

moaning of spurs
stirs a sweet smile

from an admirer.
like a shooting star

or fireworks,
her bruised pupils illuminate.

he tips his straw-colored hat,
“howdy ma’am”

3/22/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Hoffman Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 9:39 PM
An intriguing romantic write you have woven here Kim! Very nice hero saves damsel in distress story!~Che :) PS Thanks so much for nice comments on my poems! :))
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 9:40 PM
You’re welcome, Che :)
Green Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Such a nice feeling is portrayed in your poem Kim. A wonderful down home touch comes across nicely.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 7:02 PM
Thanks so much! :)
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