The elevator's odd occupant-CM

The man in the elevator
What an odd man indeed
He looks as if he's about to let out a thunderous sneeze
He taps his feet rapidly like an Irish jig
And his rotund ears are incredibly big
His eyes are wider than a tremendous gorge
And his stomach is almost touching the floor
Oh, the man in the elevator
What an odd man indeed
Unfortunately that odd man in the elevator
Is me
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Borke Avatar
December 5, 2025 at 4:15 AM
I would not want to be in an elevator with a mirror
Messina Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 10:08 AM
So, there's two of us, huh. (lol) Love this, Eli. Great writing, my friend. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Way to go! Charlie
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December 1, 2025 at 6:35 AM
Good one, Eli! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Agustin Avatar
November 8, 2025 at 5:03 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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