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The Elevator Incident

There once was a man in an elevator Riding his elephant named Ella Vader She felt she had to sneeze Her man she tried to please So, she sprayed peanuts on the curator
I know the wrong syllable count on 1, 2, and 5
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Kerr Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 4:34 PM
Hello Sara, Very witty and also reads well which is important for a great Limerick. Thanks for your review of This Autumn Crypt. Howard
Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 4:21 AM
Howard, thank you. Sometimes it is hard to get the rhythm of a Limerick. I am glad you found that it reads well as well as being witty. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 6:17 PM
I appreciate your humor in this Limerick. hugs and blessings, Sara B
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 3:32 AM
Thank you, Sara B. I am glad you liked it. We need a little humor in our lives sometimes. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 5:15 AM
Very funny! Hugs!
Kendrick Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 12:05 PM
Thank you, Kim. I hope you got a laugh because laughter is the best medicine. Sara K
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 4:02 AM
- Glad I wasn't in that elevator :))) - A fun one, Sara :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 4:42 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting. Sara K
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