The Elephant

I lie here, naked and exposed, splayed out upon
an open plain, under the hot, African sun, still as stone
slowly decomposing. My life fluids have drained away.

I am a massive hulk of dried out skin and bones
my large trunk lies flaccid at my side, my great
ears are rotting at the edges. I smell of putrid waste.

Do I detect a presence in my midst? Do I hear a sudden
gasp? A muffled cry? Are your eyes widening, pupils
dilating in horror?

Do come and see my wretched state. For I was hunted for
pleasure, for mere sport, discarded like a worthless penny
shot down for the hell of it. 

Why is man so careless? So callous? For we beasts are at
your mercy. You mourn for me today, but will you care
tomorrow? 

I lie here, naked and exposed, splayed out upon
an open grave.






Written on 4/8/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marcum Wong Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 10:22 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win with this very moving piece Laura. It so sad that some humans think their worth so much more than these beautiful animals. #7 ; )
Leiser Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 11:50 PM
So true about these wonderful creatures, Connie. Thanks for stopping by to comment!
A. Sharma Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 5:05 AM
Magnificent write Laura.. congrats on great win!
Leiser Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 8:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Upma. Glad you liked it!
La France Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 6:25 PM
Laura, absolutely and totally amazing, it made me want to weep, you penned the emotion so well, a winner for me always , 7 ++++
Leiser Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 8:42 PM
Thank you so much, Connie :) It came to me all at once, and the emotions just poured forth. I still feel sad about the horror committed to these beautiful creatures.
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 6:21 PM
wow, I hope he scored you high on this one. You did a FANTASTIC job with that theme!!
Leiser Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 8:43 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I was emotionally moved by the picture of this magnificent creature who was murdered by poachers. I pray this practice will cease soon!
Williams Gault Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 9:55 AM
Your piercing verses gave me pause, so senseless this slaughter is. Awesome expression, congratulations!
Leiser Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 8:44 PM
Thanks for your comments, Dineen. It truly is a horrific tragedy.
Peterson Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 7:48 AM
Yours is such an emotionally rich composition, noteworthy for its reflexive aptitude. I succumbed to your words and message in utter awe while those in need of hearing its message most, abase themselves in craven acts of horror and wanton turpitude. I wrote one with similar intent about wolves, entitled Wolf Song.
Leiser Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 8:20 AM
Thank you for your thoughtful rely, Mark. I'll check out your Wolf poem, as well!
Gupta Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 5:06 AM
Bold and emotion-rich... Congratulations on your top win...
Leiser Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 8:18 AM
Thanks, Probir
Delaney Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 11:54 PM
Great idea to use personification. Congratulations on your high placement. Such senseless slaughter for money. It's so heartbreaking. SuZ
Leiser Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 8:17 AM
Thanks, Suzanne..
Davey Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 5:47 PM
Wow very powerful Laura, congratulations
Leiser Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 9:29 PM
Thank you very much, Daniel. Glad you were moved by it :)
Turner Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 5:38 PM
Back to say congratulations Laura on your winning write. I knew it was a good one the first time I read it. Peace young lady:)
Leiser Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 9:29 PM
Thank you for your supportive words, Daniel. I appreciate them so much;)
Haight Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 5:21 PM
So powerful and full of emotion and wisdom regarding our dear earth creatures, Laura. Congratulations on our fine win! Hugs, Sandra
Leiser Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 9:28 PM
Thank you, Sandra. I appreciate your kind comments very much :)
Anish Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 9:16 PM
I just completed an article about elephants and realize that - as you showed in your fine work - that we must act boldly to insure their survival. Good message and poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Leiser Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 11:33 PM
Thank you for your response to my poem, Matthew. Glad you could also write on this important subject, as well.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 12:01 AM
Vivid imagery of one of our most noble beasts, and that they should be treated in this manner is a crying shame. A poem that I hope will bring attention to this horrific endeavour. BRAVO to you for this. Best wishes, Keith
Leiser Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 8:47 PM
Thank you, Keith, for your thoughtful response. I hope this poem helps make more people aware of the elephant's plight, whether killed for sport or for poaching.
Turner Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 12:32 PM
Very emotive write, Laura. Excellent interpretation. Have a great weekend. Peace young lady:) Good luck in contest.
Turner Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 12:45 PM
See them "murdered!"
Leiser Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Thank you, Daniel. Elephants are so magestic, and it's very sad to see them die.
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