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The Elephant



We have great animals on this grand Earth
of varied size- they live on land or sea.
Domestic ones, we love for all their worth;
like, family we live in harmony.

But grandest in our mix of wild beasts here- 
our elephant, the largest one on land.
Though giant-sized, of them I have no fear- 
a gentle kind with traits I understand.

They do not kill for meat or dominance,
but feast on greens wherever they might roam.
Their matriarch displays her prominence- 
she leads and guards her group, her lasting home.

Emotions they display at death or birth,
caressing with their trunks the fallen ones,
and cradling safe tween feet of massive girth
their offspring, never crushed by weighty tons.

Of course, when threatened be it man or beast,
they will defend and charge with all their might.
But when the threat is gone or is decreased-
they back away and calmly end a fight.

They are not only massive in their size,
but awesome in the cultured ways they act.
Intelligent with feelings realize
the need to keep their family intact.

Oh, giant beast of Earth, dear elephant,
your gentle nature thrills my human heart.
Majestic in your size, so eloquent,
I pray from here on Earth you'll never part.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Canerdy Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:57 PM
Excellent! Sandra, congrats on your well-deserved win. Janice
Haight Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 5:22 PM
Thank you, Janice, for your nice comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Smith Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 2:44 PM
What magnificent creatures, and what a great write, congratulations again Sandra...
Haight Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 7:04 PM
Yes, they are wonderful creatures and very intelligent. Thank you for your visit and positive comment/congrats! Sandra
Mcclain Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 7:26 PM
Hi Sandra, Congrats on your win with this touching tribute to the elephant. We must remember never to buy articles made of ivory, no matter how beautifully carved.
Haight Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 8:26 PM
Thank you for your nice comment, Brian. No ivory for me...I watch many animal shows on NatGeo Wild...it breaks my heart to see such beautiful and intelligent creatures mistreated or killed. Sandra
Devnath  Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 12:47 PM
Excellent poem my lovely friend. My fav. one. Congrats on your great win with placement. Loved always, bl
Haight Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 8:27 PM
Thank you, BL. So pleased you like this elephant poem. I admire them so much. I appreciate your visit and nice feedback. Thanks again. Sandra
Scars Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 11:56 AM
Sandra, congrats on your top placement in the contest :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 8:28 PM
Hi Luloo, thank you so much! Hugs, Sandra
A  Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 1:38 PM
congrats
Haight Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 7:34 PM
Thanks, Skat! Sandra
A. Sharma Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 10:56 PM
Wonderful write n win Sandra! Big congrats!
Haight Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 7:34 PM
Thank you, Dr. Upma. I appreciate your support and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 4:15 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 7:34 PM
Thank you so much, Eve! Hugs, Sandra
D. Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 12:49 PM
Sandra, thank you
Roper Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 2:55 PM
Awesome write, Sandra, a 7 and good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 7:21 PM
Hi Eve, thank you so much for your visit with your nice comment and support. Hugs, Sanda
Mika-Stevens Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 11:57 AM
This is a fabulous, factual, fun poem to read...I don't know, but I think it will be at the top in the contest it is in. Great education, great rhyme, great story......
Haight Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 7:22 PM
Hi Genevieve, so nice of you to stop by and read my poem. Thanks so much for your positive and encouraging comments. Sandra
Reese Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 8:14 PM
Very well done.The rhyme and meter are spot on with very good imagery.It always a pleasure for me to read such well structured poetry.
Haight Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 5:18 PM
I am very pleased that you like this, Charles. Thank you so much for your supportive comments. Sandra
Pinet Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 12:29 PM
Nicely put, well written with poetic flare. Nice flow of words and a pleasant sounding poem with all the right stuff. Emile.
Haight Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 7:56 PM
Hi Emile, I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for your supportive comments. Sandra
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August 23, 2015 at 9:51 PM
This is as impressive, as an elephant is large. I enjoyed this piece very much. They are indeed amazing creatures.
Haight Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 7:56 PM
Richard, thank you so much for stopping by with your positive comment. Yes, they are magnificent creatures. I love watching documentaries about them on TV. Sandra
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 8:10 PM
A majestic write Sandra - I've not thought of writing for this contest yet - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 7:54 PM
Thank you, Jan. I love elephants! I appreciate your nice comment and good luck wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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