Get Your Premium Membership

The Elephant

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Sandra Haight.


 

We have great animals on this grand Earth of varied size- they live on land or sea. Domestic ones, we love for all their worth; like, family we live in harmony. But grandest in our mix of wild beasts here- our elephant, the largest one on land. Though giant-sized, of them I have no fear- a gentle kind with traits I understand. They do not kill for meat or dominance, but feast on greens wherever they might roam. Their matriarch displays her prominence- she leads and guards her group, her lasting home. Emotions they display at death or birth, caressing with their trunks the fallen ones, and cradling safe tween feet of massive girth their offspring, never crushed by weighty tons. Of course, when threatened be it man or beast, they will defend and charge with all their might. But when the threat is gone or is decreased- they back away and calmly end a fight. They are not only massive in their size, but awesome in the cultured ways they act. Intelligent with feelings realize the need to keep their family intact. Oh, giant beast of Earth, dear elephant, your gentle nature thrills my human heart. Majestic in your size, so eloquent, I pray from here on Earth you'll never part.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/26/2016 3:57:00 PM
Excellent! Sandra, congrats on your well-deserved win. Janice
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 4/26/2016 5:22:00 PM
Thank you, Janice, for your nice comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/21/2016 2:44:00 PM
What magnificent creatures, and what a great write, congratulations again Sandra...
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 4/25/2016 7:04:00 PM
Yes, they are wonderful creatures and very intelligent. Thank you for your visit and positive comment/congrats! Sandra
Date: 4/20/2016 7:26:00 PM
Hi Sandra, Congrats on your win with this touching tribute to the elephant. We must remember never to buy articles made of ivory, no matter how beautifully carved.
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 4/20/2016 8:26:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comment, Brian. No ivory for me...I watch many animal shows on NatGeo Wild...it breaks my heart to see such beautiful and intelligent creatures mistreated or killed. Sandra
Date: 4/20/2016 12:47:00 PM
Excellent poem my lovely friend. My fav. one. Congrats on your great win with placement. Loved always, bl
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 4/20/2016 8:27:00 PM
Thank you, BL. So pleased you like this elephant poem. I admire them so much. I appreciate your visit and nice feedback. Thanks again. Sandra
Date: 4/20/2016 11:56:00 AM
Sandra, congrats on your top placement in the contest :)-luloo
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 4/20/2016 8:28:00 PM
Hi Luloo, thank you so much! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/18/2015 1:38:00 PM
congrats
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 9/18/2015 7:34:00 PM
Thanks, Skat! Sandra
Date: 9/16/2015 10:56:00 PM
Wonderful write n win Sandra! Big congrats!
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 9/18/2015 7:34:00 PM
Thank you, Dr. Upma. I appreciate your support and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/16/2015 4:15:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Hugs Eve
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 9/18/2015 7:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/16/2015 12:49:00 PM
Sandra, thank you
Login to Reply
Date: 8/28/2015 2:55:00 PM
Awesome write, Sandra, a 7 and good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 8/29/2015 7:21:00 PM
Hi Eve, thank you so much for your visit with your nice comment and support. Hugs, Sanda
Date: 8/28/2015 11:57:00 AM
This is a fabulous, factual, fun poem to read...I don't know, but I think it will be at the top in the contest it is in. Great education, great rhyme, great story......
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 8/29/2015 7:22:00 PM
Hi Genevieve, so nice of you to stop by and read my poem. Thanks so much for your positive and encouraging comments. Sandra
Date: 8/24/2015 8:14:00 PM
Very well done.The rhyme and meter are spot on with very good imagery.It always a pleasure for me to read such well structured poetry.
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 8/25/2015 5:18:00 PM
I am very pleased that you like this, Charles. Thank you so much for your supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 8/24/2015 12:29:00 PM
Nicely put, well written with poetic flare. Nice flow of words and a pleasant sounding poem with all the right stuff. Emile.
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 8/24/2015 7:56:00 PM
Hi Emile, I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for your supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 8/23/2015 9:51:00 PM
This is as impressive, as an elephant is large. I enjoyed this piece very much. They are indeed amazing creatures.
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 8/24/2015 7:56:00 PM
Richard, thank you so much for stopping by with your positive comment. Yes, they are magnificent creatures. I love watching documentaries about them on TV. Sandra
Date: 8/23/2015 8:10:00 PM
A majestic write Sandra - I've not thought of writing for this contest yet - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 8/24/2015 7:54:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. I love elephants! I appreciate your nice comment and good luck wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Book: Shattered Sighs