The Eerie Lake

When I sit beside the lake in daylight,
The world seems to breathe more gently.
 The water is still, calm, and shining.
 your face appears upon its surface—
 And I am lost in you—vague dreamily

When I sit beside the lake at twilight,
The red light falls on the silent water;
 Your face awakens, pale and infinite.
 Then it melts softly into the water—
 I fear your soul is fading with the lake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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