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The Edge of Love's Steep Cliff

the edge of love’s steep cliff Love is all we hoped it would be promise of a wish for us But lover here we are flying high love's no more an empty dream So kiss me with your sweet lips don’t let this love slip by sweetheart we are a pair of friends who fallen over the edge of love’s steep cliff My dear heart you would say all was gone you’re too old to care again But lover look at us we can fly just took dawn to make us see So kiss me with your sweet lips don’t let this love slip by and lover we are a pair of friends who fallen over the edge of love’s steep cliff who fallen over the edge of love’s steep cliff who fallen over the edge of love’s steep cliff To the tune of "Star of the Story" by George Benson https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j0c_MbhIMJ4 8/26/16

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Date: 7/30/2017 10:45:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Janis. Congrats on your win.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/16/2017 8:06:00 PM
Thanks Afzal.
Date: 7/30/2017 1:01:00 AM
I adore this song, (and the entire album it came from), and LOVED this poem! I am first and foremost a Jazz Guitarist, so this was enjoyable all the way around for me! Congrats on NINTH PLACE!! :-)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/16/2017 8:06:00 PM
Greg, I just saw your post. Technical difficulties I guess. I will have to refresh the page after I copy and paste this comment. I love Star of the Story, listen to it all the time. Would love to hear your rendition. Thanks for the placement.
Date: 8/28/2016 11:41:00 AM
Janis, just beautiful lady...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest (sorry for the late comment) :)-luloo
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/28/2016 1:26:00 PM
Good contest. Thanks.
Date: 8/27/2016 11:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Janis.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/28/2016 1:26:00 PM
Thanks, Afzal
Date: 8/27/2016 11:09:00 PM
Congrats on your placing high. Well done with this lovely write and presentation. :) Sunita
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/28/2016 1:27:00 PM
Thanks, Sunita

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