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The Edge

~A Place called The Edge~ We kept our heads up high, at the boundary of the universe We Gave no thought, closing every feeling in a wooden box Remaining firm on two principles, practice, and good will Letting go- -With the idea of free falling -I traveled with the current of air I broke into the mindset of your whispers... Watching over the glow, in your eyes... With disrupted ways you reform issues, Becoming objective, in ways I need to follow Life and its vanity are so unfair, A goddess re-birth Through the needle eyes of mother earth Within the flames, one rises to the edge of games The phoenix call, withheld wisdom that we can't feel at all As it cascaded into dreams we recognized A place to visit, When in distress, stepping on my own shoe I walk the distance, falling into a stream of romance A projectile performance, in an exotic trance A new psychological pat was formed Firm and fair, A monarch standing in my way Beneath the fall, above the ledge, The clouds swallow, every shadow left Shattering every crimson sea, Flying high with eternalness by my side My sleepless days are aimless and carried out Covered in ashes, with the vividness of the ocean. Holding hands, at the edge of everything Dangling by, as if we had a split personality Standing on the edge, we count our steps As we pace backwards, to relive a life without strife I've been there, I am there! Living on the edge of everything :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/7/2016 10:56:00 AM
Found the poetic form, PD. It's called a Villanelle. It was Skat's poem used as an example from Poetry Soup. "Chocolate Fountain," was her poem. Y'all are some kinda wonderful talented scribes. Will keep reading your works. They're greeaaat! Love you as always.
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Date: 10/7/2016 10:47:00 AM
A very cool and thought inducing poem, Linda. It has soooo much existentialism in it. Raised questions, elevated answers, and so on and so forth. Great job. Fell into this one while looking for a particular style form that I can't quite remember. But the example given was the poem "Don't Go Gently Into The Night" I do believe. Oh well, will keep searching. Love you, PD.
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Date: 2/4/2016 10:45:00 PM
The edge of everything. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/15/2014 9:29:00 PM
PD What a wonderfully written story filled with every emotion imaginable. You captivated the reader and pulled them into the poem with you. thank you for the great comment on my Garden poem.
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Date: 12/7/2011 6:57:00 AM
this is what i am talking about,,,so beautiful a choice,,,to yearn,,to hurt,,to love,,to dig down so deep,,to trust,,,to stand,,and at the end to choose,,,guided by the dream,,the belief,,the knowlege of a eternity..........so brilliant a write,,my friend...
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Date: 12/2/2011 11:37:00 PM
the paths we take, the thirsts we slake, the crimson flush desire, thoughts sometimes do inward make, the embers fan the fire... thanks p d
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Date: 10/27/2011 10:22:00 AM
you may think this is retarded but i love it
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Date: 10/27/2011 10:01:00 AM
This poem made me taste a bit of depression... yet it's written beautifully, P.D. I love this. Dinda
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Date: 10/21/2011 4:12:00 PM
holy, moly, read it slowly, savoring each word-phrase wholly. rollin' flow, cuppa joe to break the trippy trance-like glow of this cool po. Def dig this one, thanks for sharin', beauty eve to ya, pd. namaste~N
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Date: 10/15/2011 7:02:00 PM
loved it....all your writing is so good,,,nice of you to share it with us...
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Date: 10/15/2011 5:03:00 PM
WOW this is an outstanding write -- I love the last stanza of this poem.-- wow--wow---wow nothing more to say. love phyl
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Date: 10/14/2011 6:56:00 PM
Beautifully written P.D., I almost went over the edge...luv shannon
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Date: 10/13/2011 12:57:00 PM
What a great write dear poet ! So poignant and captivating ! Have a wonderful day Linda....much love, james
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Date: 10/11/2011 1:25:00 PM
Very strong words indeed. I enjoy starting my day with this one... Robert
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Date: 10/10/2011 2:23:00 PM
Another piece here that shows how far you can stretch your arms and mind ... Poetry at its best.... MJF
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Date: 10/10/2011 2:02:00 AM
'this is really wonderful. I just love the feeling it evokes. I was thinking this would be part two of the other but I guess not. I think this one was very inspired, Irma! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/9/2011 10:32:00 PM
The exotic trance is where I could be Linda, what an exquisite thought. And dangling on the edge is another. Love this poem, the vivid images give lots to dream about.
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Date: 10/9/2011 9:54:00 PM
wow! this is just to show how richly diverse you are as a person with so many boundless emotion and imagination. loved it PD!
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Date: 10/9/2011 6:50:00 PM
complex emotion is felt near the cliff, forward an backwards, i wonder what if, sometimes... felt very intense here....
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Date: 10/8/2011 9:58:00 PM
this was a beautiful write my friend.. How you been? Cory ( AKA Free spirit :)
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Date: 10/8/2011 11:16:00 AM
this poem makes me happy i truly love it ofcourse i love all things about the edge and i am always glad to have company especially yours
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Date: 10/7/2011 10:06:00 PM
Oh we always find ourselves at the edge, and then when we return everything else seems so trivial does it not? A beautiful poem with tons of vibrant imagery P.D., enjoyed this read immensely
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Date: 10/7/2011 5:53:00 PM
hi my friend, thanks for stopping by! am feeling renewed again! your stanza's 3 & 4 are my favorites here! beautiful leaps of association! bringing the reader along for a dreamy ride! keep up the good work! jimbo
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Date: 10/7/2011 5:12:00 PM
well PD my BFF this is certainly dynamic and dramatic..filled with intense lines of life on the edge ...decisions... obstacles.. victory.. life without strife is some fantastic goal we all want my friend.. one of very best luv.. hi to everyone... your BFF in ache and pain mode from moving ..I think I am Xenia Warrior Princess of Moving..haha..
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Date: 10/7/2011 1:43:00 PM
one typo: (sorry I'm subdued at the moment) principal, should be principle. The way you have it You were standing on two authoritive figures, but probably in elementary school man, don't sweat it. Cindy
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