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The Echoes Within

The Echoes Within I am the pertinacious child of dauntless demands, The frightened child of explosive hands. The enchanting warmth of a midsummer's day; The deserted breadth of comforts age. The inquisitive bustle of delightful charms; The hunger of a world alarms. The silent whisper of loving kisses; The ABC'S of Hershey's Wishes...

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Date: 10/2/2017 4:18:00 AM
I like your couplets, or rhyme (that's what this is). I like the word 'pertinacious', I had never heard of it, and I love learning new words, so thank you. And welcome to PoetrySoup.
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Cyn Sadler
Date: 10/2/2017 1:59:00 PM
Thank you Darrin! I'm new to this. Hoping that I am posting right. I have only a few poems. Late bloomer here! ??

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