The Echo Returns Not

The bare granite hill, worn down each day, 
I climb halfway and call your name. 
A sound rings loud, echoing near, 
Yet only silence fills my ear. 
The hot wind halts, the sky stands bare, 
Yet stillness meets me, cold and rare. 

The valley knows the sound of stone chippers, 
Knows your laughter sweet and melodious, 
Now the stones, though worn and wise, 
Keep your voice in mute disguise. 

I wait, I listen—time stands thin, 
Yet no reply will call me in. 
Some echoes fade, some never start, 
And some are swallowed by the heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Goldsmith Avatar
March 28, 2025 at 11:02 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Great Ending... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day..........
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 11:13 PM
Really nice one. It should win if in the contest.
George Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 9:35 PM
"Some echoes fade, some never start, And some are swallowed by the heart." Very touching lines. A beautifully composed poem.
Poet Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 11:34 AM
Well written, Jay - It is disheartening while the soul remains unanswered - best of luck for the contest :)
Andresen Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 1:36 PM
- Great written, Jay - Sad when the heart doesn't get its answer - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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