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The Echo Returns Not

The stars dance across the sky A nightly recital of spinning and whirling They’re in the spotlight here But I know they’re invisible to him Playing hide-and-go-seek offstage I scream his name to the cosmos In some sort of harrowed cry Or desolate plea for redress It comes out raspy, choked The faraway stars have no reply The echo returns not I’m left standing in the dark Mourning his mindlessnesses Bombarded by the silence

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Date: 3/14/2025 3:56:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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