The Earth Moved

There was a couple that went off to Spain
They sat on the roof sunbathing again
They felt the earth shake
Though love they didn’t make
It was a 5.8 earthquake, that hit once again

funnynaturelimerick

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Harry Horsman

Date: 8/6/2014 10:45:00 AM

shake baby shake, your limerick does

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/9/2013 11:44:00 AM

My Dear Sister, Mandy, if I keep reading YOUR SOUPER Super Limericks I may be able to write one soon. I wonder if when YOU wrote this YOU looked at the future in a Crystal Ball, as YOU and Hubby just came back from Spain; but this was written a Year ago.Paranormal?? I LOVE YOU SIS, ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Brother Eternal...Harry

John Smith

Date: 1/8/2012 5:22:00 AM

Your picture looks like you sunbathing in Spain. On a scale of 5.8 I rate you 5.8. Nice tan and Limerick.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/9/2012 4:06:00 AM

Thank you John for reading and commenting, must add, old photo.xx

Don Johnson

Date: 1/8/2012 1:54:00 AM

and it wasn't raining in spain yet again not again yes again, cute poem mate....

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/8/2012 3:01:00 AM

Thanks Don, we found out while we were there we were on an earthquake belt, think they forgot to tell us before so the earth moves quite a bit....x

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 1/6/2012 8:03:00 AM

In a few words you are telling everything u wanted to tell, love it, jag

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/8/2012 3:02:00 AM

Thank you Jag x

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/6/2012 7:57:00 AM

Romantic Earthquake,lovely one. Thanks earthquake in sunbathing. enjoyed. bl

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/6/2012 7:40:00 AM

good one mandy, like this, need a laugh today. harry. p.s hope everything ok with the opp.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/9/2012 4:09:00 AM

Hope you have cheered up a bit and yes he is getting on well thank you xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2012 8:54:00 PM

A fun one, Mandy. Have you ever been in an earthquake? I don't know what 5.8 feels like,but I was in the one around 7.9 in San Francisco in '89. Where are you from?

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/9/2012 4:08:00 AM

Two in england, with slight damage to house, one in Italy, n damage two in Spain no damage to us but others yes. xx I'm from England. Thanks for the comment. xx

Jack Horne

Date: 1/4/2012 3:25:00 PM

LOL, good one! Many congrats on your wins, my friend : )