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The Earth Bleeds

THE EARTH BLEEDS

We need a little light and dark.
Our eyes but blur infinity blue,
as a cradle robs us of our spark
when we visualize variety’s few.

The white nest of my sparrow skin,
a scintilla reflection of the Holy Spirit.
He distributes wisdom from within
a dark parka, grass skirt, winsome fan skit.

Proud to be white with ruddy sensation,
as my multicolored Sethian kindred,
adore, the beauty of their own pigmentation.
In this world, as God so chose, we are bred.

Pure white of virginity, of celestial wings
we lose. I ask do we really resemble right?
All are but pain and scars, disjointed things.
Honestly the earth bleeds red not white!

1/13/2018
What is white/Debbie Guzzi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Payton Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 10:18 PM
Well said, you have a lovely way with words Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 10:36 PM
Thanks so much!
Babu Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 9:09 PM
Wow this is a nice poem. Congrats Kim :-) Regards, Sathya
Rodrigues Avatar
January 26, 2018 at 7:42 PM
Thanks, Sathya!
Haight Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 7:02 PM
Powerfully expressed, Kim. I love the last line. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 9:08 PM
Thank you, Sandra...Kim
Gauthier Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 1:45 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 2:35 PM
Thank you, Line!
Roper Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 11:08 PM
Wonderful write, Kim, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 9:20 AM
Thanks, Eve!
Pett Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 2:42 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Kim, a joy to read. :))
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 4:39 PM
Thanks, Roy!
Guzzi Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 8:16 PM
Very polished thoughtful entry Kim. I do believe it wanted to be a sonnet ;) & thank you for the new concepts I learned from the verse. Congrad's Light & Love
Rodrigues Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 8:28 PM
Thanks so much, Debbie! :) Kim
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January 23, 2018 at 1:35 PM
I like the depth of your words in this piece.
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January 23, 2018 at 1:36 PM
Congrats on your win.
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