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The Earth As I See It

Atop the mountain, watching “Earth Live”
Struggles, Created by Mankind
Mother “Earth” You  overcome : THRIVE
Love oozes from Your “HEART, SOUL, MIND “

Struggles, Created by Mankind
Thoughtlessness  ; You have Forgiven
Love oozes from Your  “HEART, SOUL, MIND “
The survival Pact, we both are Driven

Thoughtlessness ;  You have Forgiven
Memories of the day  of  “ Rebirth “
The survival Pact, we both are Driven
To “ Re-Supply “  His GIFT, Called  “EARTH”

Memories of the day of “ Rebirth “
The song of the Birds; the Tears of Tomorrow
To “ Re-Supply : His GIFT, Called  “EARTH”
Replenish  the LOVE; it will never know Sorrow

The song of the Birds; the Tears of Tomorrow
Mother “Earth” You overcome : THRIVE
Replenish the  LOVE; it will never know Sorrow
Atop the Mountain, watching Earth : ALIVE

Inspired By the Contest “ Pantoum “
Sponsored By Paula Swanson
Written By HGarvey Daniel Esquire

Dedicated to Paula Swanson; Thank-YOU for YOUR inspiring
                                   “ Pantoums “
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 1:18 AM
Many congrats HGarvey on winning coveted HM in Paulas Pantoum contest with this beautiful write. Luv/best wishes........Hitendra Mehta
Brown Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 11:40 AM
Congratulations on your win HG in Paula's Pantoum contest. Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations on your HM in the Pantoum Contest, HG! Enjoy! Hope all is well! Love, Audrey
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December 12, 2010 at 11:59 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest with this joyful poem, HG. Love and blessings for happy holidays, Carolyn
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December 12, 2010 at 7:39 AM
Congrats HG my silent beau, on your HM in Paula's Pantoum contest with this vibrant write and win ..enjoy a special honor all your own with luv .. from your forever and always "Sweetheart" ...
Mehta Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 6:03 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of paula, HG
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 12:28 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today HG. Hope to be reading it for a long time to come. Thank you for sharing it. The best to you in the contest. Thank you for your always kind words my forever friend. Love, Carol
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December 6, 2010 at 4:40 PM
I love the joy and hope that spring from this poem, H.G. Hope you are filled with both this holiday season. Love, Carolyn
Guzzi Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 3:16 PM
Hey there, just stopped in to say thanks for trying that sestina form is a killer..grrrrrr...but I like having ALL those loverly words..if I wasn't already late judging I would have tried to be of more help..please DO work on it I can tell you were invested in your words. Light & Love always
Mehta Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 1:11 PM
Nice Pantoum with variant refrains, HG
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