The Eagle

The Eagle The eagle, sits and wait like a thief, he gapes Not knowing, when he is going to strike His prey, roams With stretched out wings, he glides Without warning, he bolts His crockett toes, he curls Snatching his prey With power, he flies Taking them, on high As he sinks his beak and rips apart He is still a beautiful bird With, very keen eyes

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/26/2020 10:21:00 AM

This is a wonderful first poem. Well done!

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/28/2015 11:49:00 PM

Myles, this a good debut poem to poetry soup. Nice imagery! I would also like to extend you a friendly welcome to poetry soup. This is a place where you can learn and grow from other poets like you. You've already visited my page and you are welcome anytime:-)Alexis

Myles Home
Date: 11/6/2015 7:46:00 AM

Alexis, A big thanks.. I love reading the constructive combination of words, put together, that sounds great and make me think..

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/22/2015 5:15:00 AM

Descriptive write Myles, this the first poem you posted here.. fluid flow too..! Welcome here! =`)~Olive Eloisa

Myles Home
Date: 10/25/2015 2:34:00 PM

I thank you, for taking time and reading my poem.. I look forward reading your poems.. Thanks again...

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 10/15/2015 1:28:00 PM

I have a poem about the red-tail hawk, it's beauty in flight, its terror when it strikes. So I can appreciate your poem. Thanks for the stop by. Best to you. / M

Myles Home
Date: 10/18/2015 2:33:00 PM

Thank you, sir.. Some how, I have the greatest respect for you... I will continue reading your poems.. I will look for your poem, on the red-tail hawk.. Thanks, for the comment..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2015 3:03:00 PM

- Welcome as a new member at P-Soup - A great first poem from you :) - I wish you good luck and a lot of new "poet" friends, Myles :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Myles Home
Date: 10/13/2015 8:14:00 AM

Thanks, I appreciate the welcome, and I will enjoy reading your poems...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/8/2015 7:23:00 PM

Hi Myles, This is my warm welcome to you, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Myles Home
Date: 10/9/2015 8:08:00 AM

I, thank you very much.. I also, will enjoy reading your thoughts on paper..

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2015 4:37:00 PM

Wonderful imagery Myles :-) hugs Jan xx

Myles Home
Date: 10/9/2015 8:11:00 AM

Thank you, Jan! I got your hug, and right back at you.. I look forward reading, your many poems...

Skat A

Date: 10/8/2015 4:36:00 PM

Myles, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Myles Home
Date: 10/9/2015 8:20:00 AM

Good doctor, I thank you! I have been reading your poems, and so far, my thoughts and expression, have increased.. I may steal some toughts.. Please, dont send the cops... Words put in a contructive way, can motivate and put smiles on one's face..See you around.. Thanks for the WC...