The Eagle

soaring eagle swoops ~ a rabbit runs for its life escapes down a hole ~

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Date: 3/3/2018 7:16:00 AM

Love this!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/3/2018 7:26:00 AM

Thanks Kim, and a happy ending too.

Date: 3/2/2018 9:05:00 AM

Lucky rabbit...

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/2/2018 10:07:00 AM

He certainly was S.O., my next one he might not be so lucky lol

Date: 3/2/2018 2:04:00 AM

Thank God... The rabbit escaped... Excellent imagery...Loved it...

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/2/2018 2:19:00 AM

Thank you Supraja, I know predators' have to survive but I do like to see them lose occasionly. Tom

Date: 3/1/2018 10:54:00 PM

Lovely haiku with a Hollywood finish... Hooray the rabbit got away. Beautifully done, Tom.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/2/2018 1:32:00 AM

Hip hip hooray / Rabbit got away/ Still alive today/ Eagle didn't get his way/ ... I'm picking up your vibe Line.

Date: 3/1/2018 8:00:00 PM

Great imagery Tom; glad that rabbit made it down the hole!~Che :)

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/2/2018 1:29:00 AM

Thanks Cheryl , love it when the little guy wins.

Date: 3/1/2018 7:52:00 PM

You like cause and effect haiku! I have a few like that too, Tom. This would be quite the sight to see!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/2/2018 1:27:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, saw that scene on a wildlife program on TV.

Date: 3/1/2018 7:00:00 PM

Another good haiku, and inspired another from me, but can't publish on PS at the mo as I have reached the limit of 10 in 24hrs soon though... Mick

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/2/2018 1:25:00 AM

Haha,I struggle to do one in a week lol.