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The Eagle

soaring eagle swoops ~ a rabbit runs for its life escapes down a hole ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/3/2018 7:16:00 AM
Love this!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/3/2018 7:26:00 AM
Thanks Kim, and a happy ending too.
Date: 3/2/2018 9:05:00 AM
Lucky rabbit...
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/2/2018 10:07:00 AM
He certainly was S.O., my next one he might not be so lucky lol
Date: 3/2/2018 2:04:00 AM
Thank God... The rabbit escaped... Excellent imagery...Loved it...
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/2/2018 2:19:00 AM
Thank you Supraja, I know predators' have to survive but I do like to see them lose occasionly. Tom
Date: 3/1/2018 10:54:00 PM
Lovely haiku with a Hollywood finish... Hooray the rabbit got away. Beautifully done, Tom.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/2/2018 1:32:00 AM
Hip hip hooray / Rabbit got away/ Still alive today/ Eagle didn't get his way/ ... I'm picking up your vibe Line.
Date: 3/1/2018 8:00:00 PM
Great imagery Tom; glad that rabbit made it down the hole!~Che :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/2/2018 1:29:00 AM
Thanks Cheryl , love it when the little guy wins.
Date: 3/1/2018 7:52:00 PM
You like cause and effect haiku! I have a few like that too, Tom. This would be quite the sight to see!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/2/2018 1:27:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, saw that scene on a wildlife program on TV.
Date: 3/1/2018 7:00:00 PM
Another good haiku, and inspired another from me, but can't publish on PS at the mo as I have reached the limit of 10 in 24hrs soon though... Mick
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/2/2018 1:25:00 AM
Haha,I struggle to do one in a week lol.