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The Dying Game

The Dying Game Joe Dougherty Fleeting images in the fading light A whispered voice… "it will be all right" Evening draws and the shadows blend Another day's fighting has come to an end Tensions ease around the fire's light Brings a calming peace to the gathering night Cooling embers in the waning flames Blissful slumber… it's time out in the game Thoughts of glory now fade away When brother vs. brother we did play They sent the young to pay this debt Of winless victories and blameless regret Disparaging chiefs of the burial mounds Spilt our blood upon this ground For reasons, not ours to know They write off, like a bad floorshow The old soldiers they gather round Laying wreaths on hallowed ground Declare the price as freedom's due Now simply words that don't ring true NONE FEAR HERE they all proclaim Willing pawns in the dying game Now broken souls as home they go To places they no longer know The cost they paid in this day's fight Leave fewer faces in the fire's light Tear stained eyes that look away No greater debts could they pay This is more than I bargained for Shut-up kid, you're in the war NONE FEAR HERE they all proclaim Willing pawns in the dying game 6/28/2009

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Date: 7/11/2016 2:34:00 PM
Good penning Joseph, like your rhyme, well done!
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Joseph Dougherty
Date: 7/12/2016 8:27:00 PM
Gordon...Thank You keep smiling :)
Date: 7/2/2016 11:32:00 PM
Joseph Dougherty, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Joseph Dougherty
Date: 7/5/2016 1:08:00 AM
Linda, Thanks for the encourgement and by all means please speak your mine when ccritiquing my work. I have short stories I wish to share. Is this a forum for that type of work? Or should I confine my post to poetry
Date: 7/2/2016 9:02:00 PM
Joseph, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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Joseph Dougherty
Date: 7/5/2016 1:11:00 AM
SKAT A... Thanks for the welcome and your kind the words of encouragement.

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