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The Dual

In singular, in blissful ignorance, I happily existed in advance of tasting blithely an ambiguous kiss. My dear singularity, intact complacent wholesomeness, what have they done: a sweet saliva, a Chrysostom tongue, the lips, a bit thin lips, to be exact, a tricky smile, a quick eye at the clock and a continuation of the talk like nothing happened, chilly and abstract. Split into two, bereft of unity, alas, I have no more immunity for dual... Truly, ignorance is bliss. Once I’ve invented this form: aab, cddceec, ffb. I don’t know how to call it. Kurtistani?)

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Date: 4/21/2019 2:52:00 AM
The cadence of this poem is unique, Kurt, much more complicated than a mere rhyme.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 4/21/2019 9:10:00 AM
It was fun to write it) Thank you, Caren.
Date: 4/20/2019 4:31:00 PM
This is literate and fun to read.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 4/20/2019 5:11:00 PM
Thank you, Dale. It's nice to see such master in a here.
Date: 4/20/2019 3:28:00 PM
Wonderful poetry and certainly seems to be a new form to me. Perhaps you should name it as it is your new creation my friend.
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Date: 4/20/2019 5:10:00 PM
Thank you, Robert)
Date: 4/20/2019 2:42:00 AM
Wonderful Kurt, by all means put your name in your form! I have three forms I have invented and managed to include part of my name in all. I enjoyed this poem and congratulations on creating your own form. Cheers, Connie
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 4/20/2019 5:12:00 PM
Wow, 3 forms! it's awesome. Thank you for your advice, Connie.

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