The Drunkard

Feared yet inevitable that I must return
to the humble place that I call home, after
spending a few hours without concern,
at my favourite watering hole, The jester,
 
It being less than half a mile, ten minute walk
but with one step forward two steps back
stopping every person I met, just to talk,
no coordination but vocals I didn't lack,
 
after forty five minutes my house I did arrive,
attempting to insert my key into it's key hole
without success door opened, as if alive,
falling through shouting God save my soul !
 
My dear wife disgusted said I'VE HAD ENOUGH!
So have I, that's why I've come home my love.
    
27/01/2017.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/9/2017 11:56:00 PM
Humorous :D but I how sad from the poor wife's POV! :)
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Roy Pett
Date: 2/10/2017 1:22:00 AM
Thank you very much Sunita for reading and commenting on this fun write, though like you observed some people's lives are not happy ones, thanks again, Roy.
Date: 2/5/2017 11:01:00 AM
Funny haha, love it.
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Roy Pett
Date: 2/5/2017 4:30:00 PM
Thank you very Elizabeth so pleased you liked my fun write.
Date: 1/28/2017 12:24:00 PM
Good one, Roy. I enjoyed this tale!!
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Roy Pett
Date: 1/28/2017 12:28:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea for reading and commenting, so pleased you enjoyed my fun write, thanks again, Roy.
Date: 1/27/2017 10:45:00 PM
Very funny, Roy. I hope you entered this in the funny poem contest:)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/28/2017 2:29:00 PM
Well I'm Not the judge but if I had written it, I would have entered it:) Good luck!
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Roy Pett
Date: 1/28/2017 3:06:00 AM
Thank you very much Daniel, I didn't enter it into the competition but I have now, so pleased you think it's worthy, thanks again, Roy.
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