The Drowning Moment

is when he of the Mount of Olives
whom you believe keeps the night watch
catches you by surprise with a wash over your spirit
like Baptism, when he suddenly exists "de facto" 
as you are walking, just as you always do, on 
blood-red carpet toward a priest who will place 
in the palm of your hand bread for which 
you are the supplicant, when words you recited 
by rote only moments ago become alive 

in bas-relief as solid as sentences carved in stone, 
and the song you were humming softly 
because you have always loved the melody 
resurrects a white-robed schoolgirl 
in a long ago choir stall.  Those words, 
the familiar music, tugging at your heart, 
"O saving Victim, opening wide the gates of heav'n 
to man below," assail you with such a sense 
of presence, that you are like the angelic child 

in front of you who has fallen fast asleep, 
certain of the safety of his mother's arms: Body 
to body, warmth to warmth -- trustful of the lanyard.
Then, at home in Sunday calm, the chameleon sky
is an uncomplicated azure, no cloud in sight,
(though marshmallow cumulus delivers 
its own delight.)  Beyond a lakeside screened-in 
porch, three ducklings navigate their outpost,
becoming more and more adventurous,

their every paddle sending a V for Victory, 
trailing in their wake toward the Watcher in the Rye,
while a platoon of turtles periscope the surface
with an inquisitive why?  And nothing, but 
nothing, interrupts the anhinga, drying his wings, 
outspread to the sky like Jesus in anguish 
on the cross in these moments so 
sublime, you gladly, but gladly, would
go under for the third time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Lokken Avatar
February 28, 2009 at 11:47 AM
This is truly amazing, Nola. Wow....at a loss. If yours isn't a winner, then...yes, they can't read! Best wishes, Sara
Austin Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 1:59 PM
This is powerful stuff, Nola. That sublime yielding, giving up to God, light, whatever. A beautifully developed bit of verse. Love, daver
Higgins Avatar
February 24, 2009 at 1:18 PM
This is an amazing write my friend.. This poem just jumps off the page and the words moved me..Loved the way you painted this and brought me in the write.
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