The Driver His Dog and Dodge

Driver drove down dark dewy dirt road,
Despite the deer crossing sign displayed.
Drowning donuts in coffee,driving deliriously. 

Dog Daisy, in the rear is demanding dog food.
Driver doesn't decide to give into demands.
Drool dropped on the back seat, disinfectant was,
desired on designer dodge seat, a real disaster.
Disappointment, dismay and disapproval loomed
on the remainder of the dreary despicable trip.










12-10-2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Lamoureux Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 11:49 AM
A perfect entry, congrats on your win. ;0)
Kendrick Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 2:15 PM
Creative work using the letter D..Way to go with this winner. Congrats. Sara
Chamberlain Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 2:10 AM
I hate driving in the dark. It sounds like the driver had too many distractions. Congratulations on your winning placement. :-)
Agustin Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 10:01 PM
Wow! Congrats! Cheering you amidst blest Christmas spirit, while sharing with you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
Roper Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 7:58 PM
Alexis, great poem, I love the theme. Congratulations on your win. May your family celebrate an enjoyable Christmas with not only gifts, but with faith, hope and peace of the Lord. Hugs Eve
Y. Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 8:19 PM
Hi Eve, Thank you so much. You hosted such creative and fun contest. I appreciate my placement. Same to you my friend:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 6:04 AM
The "D" s tell your story, Alexis--poor dog.
Daniel Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 11:01 PM
Oh my, what a dreary trip it was, well penned, Alexis:)
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