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The Driver His Dog and Dodge

Driver drove down dark dewy dirt road, Despite the deer crossing sign displayed. Drowning donuts in coffee,driving deliriously. Dog Daisy, in the rear is demanding dog food. Driver doesn't decide to give into demands. Drool dropped on the back seat, disinfectant was, desired on designer dodge seat, a real disaster. Disappointment, dismay and disapproval loomed on the remainder of the dreary despicable trip. 12-10-2020

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Date: 12/24/2020 11:49:00 AM
A perfect entry, congrats on your win. ;0)
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Date: 12/23/2020 2:15:00 PM
Creative work using the letter D..Way to go with this winner. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 12/23/2020 2:10:00 AM
I hate driving in the dark. It sounds like the driver had too many distractions. Congratulations on your winning placement. :-)
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Date: 12/22/2020 10:01:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Cheering you amidst blest Christmas spirit, while sharing with you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
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Date: 12/22/2020 7:58:00 PM
Alexis, great poem, I love the theme. Congratulations on your win. May your family celebrate an enjoyable Christmas with not only gifts, but with faith, hope and peace of the Lord. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/22/2020 8:19:00 PM
Hi Eve, Thank you so much. You hosted such creative and fun contest. I appreciate my placement. Same to you my friend:-) Alexis
Date: 12/11/2020 6:04:00 AM
The "D" s tell your story, Alexis--poor dog.
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Date: 12/10/2020 11:01:00 PM
Oh my, what a dreary trip it was, well penned, Alexis:)
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