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The Drifter

His face was so intriguing Weathered and worn Yet there was a kindness in his eyes On a face of solemn and scorn Skin aged with time and long grey hair His eyes deep blue Remained youthful With a magnetic stare I couldn’t take my eyes of him I wanted to know more About this mysterious stranger So aloof and so sure He looked over at me His magnetic eyes locked in mine I couldn’t look away I was mesmerised by those eyes sublime He got up and walked to the door I watched him all the while He stopped and turned around He looked at me and simply smiled Thiis mysterious stranger was gone And even though we never spoke I will remember that kind face and those eyes For within me unexpected emotions he evoked

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Date: 11/20/2023 7:44:00 PM
A secret admirer, perhaps, Deb. It is similar to dreaming about people you have never met. Intriguing. Take care, Old Duck XX
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Date: 11/21/2023 3:22:00 AM
Fiction my lovely Shirley….unfortunately hehe!!! Thankyou my friend….Debx
Date: 11/20/2023 1:06:00 PM
I enjoyed your creative/fun "The Drifter" write/story.  Have a great day................
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Date: 11/20/2023 1:08:00 PM
Thankyou sweet Paula! Debx
Date: 11/19/2023 8:22:00 PM
You are a magnet for amazing experiences: Rainbows' ends... Intense stares of mysterious strangers... What's next? -- a Kangaroo with wings and flippers?
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Date: 11/19/2023 9:16:00 PM
This is fiction BB! No intense stares for me! Ha….speaking of a kangaroo with flppers!! Hehe…thanks my friend! Debx
Date: 11/19/2023 3:01:00 PM
I just loved this one, Deb. Your mysterious visitor might have been your guardian angel. You captured your enthrallment quite well. I've had a similar experience...moved and touched by someone without ever exchanging words. Am faving this one. enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 11/19/2023 5:52:00 PM
Fictional Sara…..but glad you liked and faved! Debx
Date: 11/19/2023 1:18:00 PM
A visitor from the divine. Some have the halo that has the power to hold spellbound. You are blessed my friend.
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Date: 11/19/2023 2:07:00 PM
This one is actually fiction Vijay!…Shame to say! Always a pleasure….Debx
Date: 11/19/2023 12:59:00 PM
perhaps a glimpse of your guardian angel.
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Date: 11/19/2023 1:58:00 PM
Hi jerry…l am so glad you are back!! I was worried about you and missed you…..l was going to soupmail you but couldn't….you had no soupmail. Is all ok my friend? I have missed your poems!! Debx
Date: 11/19/2023 11:33:00 AM
Deb, your splendid poem is of exquisite thought wherein you artfully depict the stranger intertwined with the enigmatic allure.
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Date: 11/19/2023 2:08:00 PM
Hi there Lasaad….thankyou for another gracious comment! Debx

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