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The Dream Store

THE DREAM STORE As I glide along the avenue dipping low this sign “The Dream Store” comes into view Just imagine! It says - “Dreams Collected Arranged Labeled We set the stage You Are The Actor” And then one other sign In big red letters “SALE” Incredible! The owner is overstocked! I’d like a mountain scene with a very green meadow sheep horses a cow or two a stony brook bubbling gurgling All these scenarios laying arranged billowing on a flat plane Hundreds Your choice “The Dream Store” Ah, what fantasy! I circle round and round now quite low at times scraping the ground I can see it “The Dream Store” But Though I endlessly persevere I cannot find the door

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Constance La France

Date: 2/13/2011 2:58:00 PM

This is beyond fantastic, what an incredible imagination and talent you have, awesome~~

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/12/2011 10:31:00 AM

aaack! where is the door?? boohoo and I so wanted to enter it after I read each line-- it sounded so enticing, this dream store! Super enjoyed reading this, Dave -- and thank you for all your gracious comments :)

James Peranteau

Date: 1/30/2011 3:19:00 PM

I feel like ; I am on a merry-go-round reading this write Sir ! LOL ! Must be.... well, a great write dear poet...and this is really good...had me going ! much love, james...soup m

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/28/2011 6:25:00 PM

charming poem, sounds just like a dreamy dream.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/28/2011 6:49:00 AM

thankxx Dave for your always warm and welcome comments on my poetry .. happy weekend my friend with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2011 8:23:00 PM

hahaha, a dream store within a dream!! Back to the getting lost crap , remember? Daver, this is a gem! And I so envy you for having three cats on your lap vying for your attention. Geeez, why did I get so unlucky with my two? Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/27/2011 2:09:00 PM

Impressive idea most creative Dave.. if only there were a dream store for real it would be busy every day and night... great imaginative quality my friend.. so enjoyed with luv..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/27/2011 2:05:00 PM

Creative to say the least. The ending is brilliant. Nice one Dave-r...BG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/27/2011 8:39:00 AM

Dreams often seem like out-of-body experiences, Daver. Sometimes we see peaceful and beautiful scenes below and wish we could just enter that world, but it's often not possible. Well done, my friend. Love, Carolyn