The Dream

"...Even if it kills me to do so in the end." I said having a tighter grip than before "You ready?" I then start dragging her out of the darkness realizing we might never escape it "Just hold on!" I exclaim looking into her eyes then back at the darkness "I won't let go." I say as we both get sucked into the darkness, we both then start to fade and I still have her hand screaming her name as we dissappear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 3, 2011 at 9:28 PM
hi again! its funny how one can save one from darkness.. and in a dream the light is what keeps us in touch with reality,..p.d.
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February 18, 2011 at 6:26 PM
a interesting dream, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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