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The Dream

gazing out onto the ocean waves gently splash above- countless stars rolling clouds a super moon like none has ever seen surely you can sense a silence that speaks between rolling waves surely you can smell the salty seaweed (can't you?) everything is right tonight this dream shall surely do.

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Date: 3/30/2019 9:49:00 AM
I can smell the salty seaweed and taste it now, Allen, so thanks for that.
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Date: 3/30/2019 12:13:00 AM
I can picture it. Nicely done.
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 3/30/2019 12:56:00 PM
Thank you David
Date: 3/29/2019 11:51:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Allen. Beautiful.
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 3/30/2019 12:57:00 PM
Thank you Line

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