The Dream

gazing out onto the ocean
waves gently splash
above-
countless stars
rolling clouds
a super moon
like none has ever seen
surely you can sense a silence
that speaks between rolling waves

surely you can smell
the salty seaweed
(can't you?)
everything is right tonight
this dream shall surely do.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 9:49 AM
I can smell the salty seaweed and taste it now, Allen, so thanks for that.
Mchattie Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 12:13 AM
I can picture it. Nicely done.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 12:56 PM
Thank you David
Gauthier Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 11:51 PM
Lovely imagery, Allen. Beautiful.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 12:57 PM
Thank you Line
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