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The Dracula's Love

There came a beast ripping flesh with his claws that was his feast on those young lads. After rippin' enough. After tearin' enough he saw the young gal who shone like Opal A tingle shot up his beastly spine, a feeling to kill some swine. He was in love with this girl called Dove. "But she's human! she'd be terrified of me! how do I convince her that I'm no beast?" He was confused, he felt aghast! He needed courage and got it at last. He walked out of his castle after one-fifty years. Terrifying the crowd going hustle bustle To see his dearest dear. When he saw her she was terrified and shone in a whitish allure. She thought she'd faint or even die. But at last saw she the good side and dreamt to on Dracula's scales slide! They left the place for the castle together to live and to separate never. "I've found my love!",Dracula thought. To Dove, too had happiness brought. No longer did Dracula kill or tear, An ant, human or a bear. "It is Dove My dear love. If not for her I'd cry and cry. Or give up and die...die...die...I can't.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/22/2009 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals . I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 10:07:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie
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Date: 12/21/2009 8:28:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 9:45:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/12/2009 4:27:00 AM
Oh! The true miracle of what love can do. Turn a beast into a loving man. Nice topic that you have chosen. Welcome to soup if I have not told you before. Keep the creative and romantic pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/4/2009 9:22:00 AM
Congratulation On Your Work Being Featured ... Well Deserved for A Pulling-Write ! ... (I watch vampire movies and it caught my attention - smile) ... Imaginative to the Max - Suspenseful Read... MoonBee
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Date: 11/2/2009 1:08:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 11/2/2009 3:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Shriyans. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/14/2009 10:18:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Shriyans. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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