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The Doughnut

At the doughnut shop
There are many choices
Most of the people choose
Doughnuts with the hole
Then eat around the it
When the hole disappears
No one knows where it goes
Nor do they really care

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Rico Leffanta

July 14, 2018 at 5:08 PM

Men lose calories in an hole so, of course, women enjoy eating an hole that has ZERO calories! Many people save the best for last, as evidenced by your verse! Aloha! Rico

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 14, 2018 at 5:20 PM

Hello Rico Leffanta,men lose weight when they eat the hole!Oh---I did not know that. Ha ha. women have zero calories eating a hole---interesting. Have a nice evening my friend.

M. L. Kiser

July 9, 2018 at 11:39 AM

It's interesting but, no...no one seems to really care because the rest is always too delicious. Enjoyed this one, as well.

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 9, 2018 at 2:05 PM

Hello M.L. Kiser yes you are correct no one seems to care.Yes you are right the rest is delicious.It was fun to create. Thankyou for the lovely comment. Havea nice day my friend.

Phyllis Babcock

July 6, 2018 at 5:16 PM

Will have to try that on the next donut. Go out a few times a week for coffee and donuts. love phyl

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 7, 2018 at 5:31 PM

Hello Phyllis I eat around the hole of the doughnut.Have a nice evening my friend.

Bonnie House

July 4, 2018 at 3:13 PM

Hello, This poem was a fun one. Doughnuts are so much fun to eat. I do what you said in the poem and that is to eat around the hole.

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 4, 2018 at 5:37 PM

Hello Bonnie I had lots of fun creating this poem. Oh that is great news.I like chocolate and lemon not together. Have a nice evening my friend.

Faraz Ajmal

July 3, 2018 at 3:41 PM

It is a really sweet poem, it has certainly bring water in my mouth, like you my favorite flavor is also chocolate but sometimes I get to eat one everyday where as sometimes I even have to wait for a whole month, whenever my mother went to bakery, she brings one for me

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 4, 2018 at 11:27 AM

Hello Faraz Ajmal I have a doughnut once a month and I choose chocolate but I also choose lemon I like lemon. Enjoy your doughnut. have a nice day my friend.

Alfred Berggren

July 2, 2018 at 9:40 PM

Hi Dar, I like to have a donut once a week, My favorite is chocolate. What is yours?

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 3, 2018 at 9:23 AM

Hello Alfred I also like chocolate. Also once a week. Have a nice day my friend.

Joseph P. DiMino

July 2, 2018 at 10:38 AM

It remains, but only wise Holistic see it. Great write. Love it!

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 2, 2018 at 3:25 PM

Hello Joe DiMino Thank you for the lovely comment my friend. I am pleased that the Holistic see it. have a nice day my friend.

Harry Horsman

July 2, 2018 at 5:03 AM

Amazing yet so simple, just love this so much, also when purchasing one has to pay for the hole as well..Yes a fun poem, and fun to read..

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 2, 2018 at 3:28 PM

Hello Harry this poem came out of me from nowhere. I have enjoyed creating this poem. Yes they would have ro buy the doughnut with the hole. Have a nice day my friend.

Sunlite Wanter

June 30, 2018 at 6:12 PM

I just had two chocolate donut holes. I know where they go!! But is this poem a metaphor? I enjoyed it.

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 1, 2018 at 10:08 AM

Hello Sunlite Wanter no this poem is not a metaphor it is just a fun poem. This poem came to me out of nowhere so I wrote it down. Have a nice day my friend.

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