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The Doorway To Dreams

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              "I open the door and cross the threshold of imagination"

                                                          Here
                                                         Inside
                                                       I can see
                                                 Untamed beauty
                               A place of true hope and of perfect peace
                           A wondrous world where love conquers the hate
                                                    Refuge is found
                                                      In still night's
                                                         Within
                                                         Dreams

                                                                               Desires
                                                                               Resting
                                                                               Earnestly
                                                                               Amidst
                                                                               Midnight
                                                                               Slumbers


   Petitioned upon pillows
   Daily devotions
   Confess sleep’s supplications

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Chiquita Chiamaka Baity
August 04, 2011

Tetractys
Acrostics
Haiku

Contest Name: Three Gems
Sponsor: Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~

Copyright © Chiquitachiamaka Baity | Year Posted 2011

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 8/16/2011 1:01:00 PM Dear Chiquita, Congratulations on YOUR Win in Constance's Contest "Three Gems" I came upon this Superb POETRY as I was reading all YOUR Tetractys' a form in which YOU are very Well Versed in "Falling Tears, Nature's Time, Thoughts, and Smiles and Frowns" All Captivating I have put YOU as One of my Favorite POETS Can't decide which POEM is my Favorite Maybe All of Them With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...HG ( Harry ) Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/13/2011 9:40:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest sponsored by Constance La France "Three Gems" Chiquita. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/13/2011 12:13:00 AM A most interesting format. Congrats on your win. I enjoyed the forms you used. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/12/2011 11:57:00 AM Congrats Chiquita on your amazing win with these brilliant lines of great expression luv... Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 8/7/2011 4:35:00 AM great poetry babe, the words we crave, absolutely... Login to Reply

Charles Melody Lightning Ink Date: 8/5/2011 2:55:00 PM you are a poet and a true painter of words. Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 8/5/2011 8:01:00 AM I'm just over whelmed here dear poet, with your talent ! This is such a fine example of Tetractys Chiquita ! I love what you've done with this write ! Just awesome ! Have a wonderful weekend....much love, james Login to Reply

Carol Eastman Date: 8/4/2011 4:15:00 PM Great writting. Very creative. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/4/2011 2:26:00 PM Enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Chiquita. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I will return to read more as time allows so keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/4/2011 1:17:00 PM Very nice take on the theme of the contest, a teacher's example to follow. Chiquita Login to Reply

James Tate Date: 8/4/2011 10:33:00 AM My, what a poem you have there, Chiquita. Very well done. My editor's cap suggests one small change in punctuation--If you mean "nights" to be only one make it "night's". If more than one make it "nights'". Thanks, too for your nice comments on my sleep poem. Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 8/4/2011 8:44:00 AM WoW! What a clever presentation. Very well thought out beautiful description of everyone's dream. Sounds like a winner to me. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 8/4/2011 6:52:00 AM another killer poem. I am going to read all of your posted poems. gimme a cpl days. don't get frustrated if a ton of people do not read your stuff. A lot of this site has to do with who comments on who. I wish people would be truthful. It's hard to win contest if you don't sit on this site for 6 hrs a day and shove compliments down ppls throats. Well, I'm not down with that. BUT, I will tell you that I deal with writers on a daily basis, and you have RAW talent. Keep em' coming. Login to Reply

Kurt Vella Petroni Date: 8/4/2011 4:27:00 AM wow, deep indeed. Login to Reply

Joanna Davis Date: 8/4/2011 3:14:00 AM Awesome…I’m amazed at your perception and clarity of expression Login to Reply

David Bailey Date: 8/4/2011 1:15:00 AM Wow, that is really good. Makes you think bout the beauty of a dream. Login to Reply