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The Doorman

I pass a doorman daily When I’m finishing my walk. He calls out, “How you doing, ma’am?” But we don’t really talk. Of course, I say good morning And perhaps a word or two Is exchanged about the weather; More than that, we don’t pursue. In December, he went missing, A replacement at the door. Was he sick or maybe fired? Those sweet greetings were no more. Then a week or two ago, voila! He waited with a smile And the friendliest hello I’ve heard In much too long a while. Where’ve you been? I had to ask him With no explanation owed me But he grabbed his phone and pictures Of his newborn daughter showed me. I was touched and wished him all the best And he was all a’glow As we shared a special moment Though our names we do not know.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 2/4/2022 12:39:00 PM
oh how wonderful Ilene I am sure he was delighted you were concerned about his whereabouts and what joyous news:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/4/2022 10:53:00 AM
Thanks for asking! During this pandemic, few ask when someone disappears . . .Aloha!
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Date: 2/3/2022 5:21:00 PM
I always felt that all those people-shaped cardboard cutouts out there… aren’t! You’ve confirmed my suspicions, Ilene. Nice write. Terry
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Date: 2/3/2022 12:48:00 PM
What a touching verse Ilene, he sounds a very proud dad, so nice of him to share his joy with you. Tom
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Date: 2/3/2022 12:30:00 PM
This is marvelous, Ilene. You've developed a "distant" friendship that is satisfying to both of you...no more, no less.
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Date: 2/3/2022 12:10:00 PM
Hello Ilene, you now know why the doorman was gone so long. Hugs.
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