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The Doorman

I pass a doorman daily
When I’m finishing my walk.
He calls out, “How you doing, ma’am?”
But we don’t really talk.

Of course, I say good morning
And perhaps a word or two
Is exchanged about the weather;
More than that, we don’t pursue.

In December, he went missing,
A replacement at the door.
Was he sick or maybe fired?
Those sweet greetings were no more.

Then a week or two ago, voila!
He waited with a smile
And the friendliest hello I’ve heard
In much too long a while.

Where’ve you been? I had to ask him
With no explanation owed me
But he grabbed his phone and pictures
Of his newborn daughter showed me.

I was touched and wished him all the best
And he was all a’glow
As we shared a special moment
Though our names we do not know.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 2/4/2022 12:39:00 PM
oh how wonderful Ilene I am sure he was delighted you were concerned about his whereabouts and what joyous news:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/4/2022 10:53:00 AM
Thanks for asking! During this pandemic, few ask when someone disappears . . .Aloha!
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Date: 2/3/2022 5:21:00 PM
I always felt that all those people-shaped cardboard cutouts out there… aren’t! You’ve confirmed my suspicions, Ilene. Nice write. Terry
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Date: 2/3/2022 12:48:00 PM
What a touching verse Ilene, he sounds a very proud dad, so nice of him to share his joy with you. Tom
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Date: 2/3/2022 12:30:00 PM
This is marvelous, Ilene. You've developed a "distant" friendship that is satisfying to both of you...no more, no less.
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Date: 2/3/2022 12:10:00 PM
Hello Ilene, you now know why the doorman was gone so long. Hugs.
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