The Door of Uncertainty

The girl,
for she still thought herself so;
     though long past consent;
the scars of which she bore
        within and without.
Awoke suddenly,
   the dull gray room
and the dull gray bed on which she lay
       lit with an enigmatic glow;
    moonlight reflected
          off a bright yellow door
     that had appeared
            at the foot of her bed.
     Her dilated pupils
             coal pits 
     in an ashen landscape
sparkled as she noticed
       not with surprise, 
   the door
       as though 
  a common occurrence;
but the color;
       yellow,
           acid
like the color used for
      warning signs.
The girl rose
          and floated towards the door,
     turned the handle,
             opened,
and stepped through
      into
         and out of
               her dream.
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Date: 4/20/2025 12:27:00 PM
Congratulations dear poet on your win in this poetry contest with a wonderful poem , skilfully crafted. Loved particularly the end which comes as a ... dream. Wish you a forthcoming new week filled with the blessings of light.
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/25/2025 9:16:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 4/20/2025 11:23:00 AM
Terry, Heartfelt congratulations on your win in the contest with this outstanding poem.
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/25/2025 9:16:00 AM
Thank you, it is alway a joy when I see a comment from yourself on the list, thank you
Date: 4/20/2025 11:13:00 AM
- Dreams are hard to understand... a trembling mood, something lurking just below the surface or behind the yellow door... reminiscent of, a fever dream, Terry - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/25/2025 9:18:00 AM
I jus love trying to capture that liminal space between dreaming and awakening, thank you for your kind comments
Date: 4/20/2025 6:45:00 AM
A very lively picture is painted in words very beautifully. Congratulations!
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/20/2025 8:16:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 4/20/2025 3:48:00 AM
cool. you are a novelist. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/20/2025 8:16:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 4/19/2025 12:17:00 PM
Terry, heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this exquisite poem. Wonderful format and imagery, too.
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/20/2025 8:17:00 AM
Thank you Edward for the comment, placement and for running such interesting contests
Date: 4/10/2025 12:54:00 PM
You have effectively used color, movement, and state of being to convey a message about reality and nonreality.
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/11/2025 8:09:00 AM
Thank you Janice
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