The Door

Ever felt like you was a door
Getting nailed,screwed and more
  Opening and closing
  Twisting and turning
Being walked all over like the floor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 1:14 PM
Sometimes I feel that way, but not very often, sweetie. Anyway, this is very vivid!! LUv, andrea
Devonshire Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 12:46 PM
How did you know, Faleshia? Just yesterday I told a friend I felt like a "doormat" and he asked me what I meant. At least you understand. Thank you for this great limerick! You work very well in this form. Love, Carolyn
Culverhouse Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 12:30 PM
funny way of putting it, hung and door jammed also. :)
Taylor Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 10:40 AM
Something to think about! Good job Faleshia. Keep 'em comin'. xxx Ralph
Anderson Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 10:40 AM
Hey faleshia, Thnx for the kind comments on my piece. ....I've asked Audrey to post this comment for me.....Jimmy
Haick Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 9:27 AM
I know the feeling....Enjoyed this Limerick, faleshia...good poem....Peace, Audrey
Bathsheba Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 9:25 AM
Love it Faleshia - Especially the 2nd line lol - Thanks for a great share -:)
Kopp Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 9:15 AM
I enjoyed reading your works today.
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