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The Door

Ever felt like you was a door Getting nailed,screwed and more Opening and closing Twisting and turning Being walked all over like the floor

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2010 1:14:00 PM

Sometimes I feel that way, but not very often, sweetie. Anyway, this is very vivid!! LUv, andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/17/2010 12:46:00 PM

How did you know, Faleshia? Just yesterday I told a friend I felt like a "doormat" and he asked me what I meant. At least you understand. Thank you for this great limerick! You work very well in this form. Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/17/2010 12:30:00 PM

funny way of putting it, hung and door jammed also. :)

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 3/17/2010 10:40:00 AM

Hey faleshia, Thnx for the kind comments on my piece. ....I've asked Audrey to post this comment for me.....Jimmy

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/17/2010 10:40:00 AM

Something to think about! Good job Faleshia. Keep 'em comin'. xxx Ralph

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/17/2010 9:27:00 AM

I know the feeling....Enjoyed this Limerick, faleshia...good poem....Peace, Audrey

Bathsheba Bathsheba

Date: 3/17/2010 9:25:00 AM

Love it Faleshia - Especially the 2nd line lol - Thanks for a great share -:)

Robb A. Kopp

Date: 3/17/2010 9:15:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your works today.