The Dmv

After 4 years of a revoked license, A remnant of my past mistake We were headed to the DMV Dreading how long it would take I gave the lady my old license She slapped a sticker on right away And then stamped it and pushed it back "Wow!!", was all we could think to say! The lady rolled her eyes at us "Have a seat!", was all that she said I looked at Judy and we laughed It was funny, but our faces were red!

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Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 12/28/2017 8:50:00 PM

Hope you get your license back; good luck and be safe! Nice realistic poem Pat!~Che :)

Pat Adams
Date: 12/29/2017 12:18:00 AM

Yes I've had it for quite a while now. In fact I haven't been in any trouble at all for quite a few years now. Guess they finally wore me down!........80)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/28/2017 5:43:00 PM

Hope you retain your driving licence along with your poetic licence Pat ... keep them both safe!!!!:-) hugs Jan xx

Pat Adams
Date: 12/29/2017 12:16:00 AM

Ah.......thank you Jan. That happened about 18 years ago. I had a couple of speeding tickets but that's all since about 15 years ago now. It's kind of bad when almost everything you talk about includes a double digit year, but oh well..............

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/28/2017 4:56:00 PM

ha! guess nothing could ever be that easy! nice poem, pat...

Pat Adams
Date: 12/29/2017 12:14:00 AM

You got that right, especially at the DMV!.....Thanks for commenting Ilene...............pat